Russell Sivey Poet Free verse

Moon's Desires

The moon has its own itinerary
Going about its business
As if I don’t exist
Within this world of exhaustive
Pieces of a whole
Just like the moon harvests
Only full but once a month
Eating away at itself
It moves along with grace
Unbeknown to the reality
That the sun
Only has so much to give
And will on day expire
Leaving the moonlight to die
Within its own desires
To be on its own devices

Russell Sivey

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Andrea Dietrich November 5, 2017 at 7:36 PM This is a different take on the moon, Russell. I really like it!! Especially the image of it eating away at itself.

Eileen Manassian November 5, 2017 at 12:47 PM I loved this piece, dear. The moon reflects the glory of the sun and it's sad to think of that eventuality. It will not happen during our lifetime...fortunately. Hugs and thanks for your visit to my work earlier. Blessings...

Heidi Sands November 4, 2017 at 12:28 PM This is an amazing poem about the moon Russell. So many like to write about the moon and you have put your creative flare into this poem :)

Susan Ashley November 3, 2017 at 10:38 PM Such a stunning piece of poetry Russell. Absolutely captivating and enchanting. Every line is alive with amazing words, ideas and imagery - such blissful poetic expression throughout. Excellent, beautiful and definitely enjoyed my friend!

Nette Onclaud November 3, 2017 at 2:36 PM i was just watching the moon and your remarkable poem brought me to enjoy its many images, russell... how beautiful, my friend.. huggs

Richard Lamoureux November 3, 2017 at 2:20 PM What a tremendous piece Russell. I am glad I stopped by to get a glimpse of the moon.

Anna Hopper November 3, 2017 at 12:45 PM Very clever and fun write! Great poem!

Demetrios Trifiatis November 3, 2017 at 8:21 AM Profound conception of the moon my friend, Russell, magnificently presented!

Michael Bell November 3, 2017 at 8:17 AM "To be on its own devices " so true Russell, the moon does many influences - a very creative write

Silent One November 3, 2017 at 7:27 AM The moon inspires people in so different ways, there must be a million poems written about the moon.. I like your take on the desire and great use of metaphor to describe it.. Great write Russell..

Jan Allison November 3, 2017 at 7:22 AM I love seeing the moon in all its stages Russell - particularly like your idea of the moon eating away at itself:-) hugs Jan xx

Vijay Pandit November 3, 2017 at 6:30 AM Very creative poem--love the line: sun only has so much to give--well done, Russell!