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Moon's Desires

The moon has its own itinerary Going about its business As if I don’t exist Within this world of exhaustive Pieces of a whole Just like the moon harvests Only full but once a month Eating away at itself It moves along with grace Unbeknown to the reality That the sun Only has so much to give And will on day expire Leaving the moonlight to die Within its own desires To be on its own devices
Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/5/2017 7:36:00 PM
This is a different take on the moon, Russell. I really like it!! Especially the image of it eating away at itself.
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Date: 11/5/2017 12:47:00 PM
I loved this piece, dear. The moon reflects the glory of the sun and it's sad to think of that eventuality. It will not happen during our lifetime...fortunately. Hugs and thanks for your visit to my work earlier. Blessings...
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Date: 11/4/2017 12:28:00 PM
This is an amazing poem about the moon Russell. So many like to write about the moon and you have put your creative flare into this poem :)
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Date: 11/3/2017 10:38:00 PM
Such a stunning piece of poetry Russell. Absolutely captivating and enchanting. Every line is alive with amazing words, ideas and imagery - such blissful poetic expression throughout. Excellent, beautiful and definitely enjoyed my friend!
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Date: 11/3/2017 2:36:00 PM
i was just watching the moon and your remarkable poem brought me to enjoy its many images, russell... how beautiful, my friend.. huggs
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Date: 11/3/2017 2:20:00 PM
What a tremendous piece Russell. I am glad I stopped by to get a glimpse of the moon.
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Date: 11/3/2017 12:45:00 PM
Very clever and fun write! Great poem!
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Date: 11/3/2017 8:21:00 AM
Profound conception of the moon my friend, Russell, magnificently presented!
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Date: 11/3/2017 8:17:00 AM
"To be on its own devices " so true Russell, the moon does many influences - a very creative write
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Date: 11/3/2017 7:27:00 AM
The moon inspires people in so different ways, there must be a million poems written about the moon.. I like your take on the desire and great use of metaphor to describe it.. Great write Russell..
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Date: 11/3/2017 7:22:00 AM
I love seeing the moon in all its stages Russell - particularly like your idea of the moon eating away at itself:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/3/2017 6:30:00 AM
Very creative poem--love the line: sun only has so much to give--well done, Russell!
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