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Moonlit Strolls - Lei

On moonlit strolls along the beach Ardor is never out of reach To rhythmic waves two lovers dance And ignite the flames of romance Then love completes the hearts desire A timeless treasure to acquire Love has delight enough for two And lights the path for hearts so true 1-3-2020 Lay It On Me - 8X8 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Charles Messina

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Eve Roper

Date: 1/16/2020 10:07:00 PM

Beautiful verse, Joseph, congratulations your win. Eve

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/16/2020 6:36:00 PM

Just sweet as sugar you've penned this romantic fling, Joseph. Congrats! Best wishes, Gershon

Joseph May
Date: 1/16/2020 8:12:00 PM

Thank you Gershon..

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/16/2020 5:33:00 PM

Romance and nature go hand-in-hand don’t they my friend? You have expressed this beautifully in your poem. Congratulations on your deserving first place win. xxoo

Joseph May
Date: 1/16/2020 8:11:00 PM

They do indeed Connie..thanks

Jan Allison

Date: 1/16/2020 10:32:00 AM

Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May
Date: 1/16/2020 8:11:00 PM

Thank you Jan

Charles Messina

Date: 1/16/2020 7:11:00 AM

Such a beautiful romantic piece, Joseph. So well done! Congratulations on your win! Blessings ~Charlie

Joseph May
Date: 1/16/2020 11:49:00 AM

Thank you for my placement Charles

Silent One

Date: 1/4/2020 9:36:00 AM

sounds lovely..

Joseph May
Date: 1/16/2020 8:10:00 PM

Thank you Silent

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/4/2020 8:12:00 AM

Hi Joseph, definitely my type of poetry - great write and creative. Blessings, Jennifer.

Joseph May
Date: 1/16/2020 8:10:00 PM

Thank you Jennifer

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/4/2020 7:50:00 AM

Excellent verses of love and romance, Joseph--loved the rhythm and flow.

Joseph May
Date: 1/16/2020 8:09:00 PM

Thank you Vijay

Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/3/2020 10:14:00 PM

"Lovers dance and ignite the flames of romance" Ahhh, yes- while lingering in the moonlight, as the waves crash. Playful moments shared indeed. :) Brandy

Joseph May
Date: 1/16/2020 8:08:00 PM

Thank you Brandy

Jan Allison

Date: 1/3/2020 6:04:00 PM

oh so beautiful and romantic Joseph, we often go for moonlight walks, sometimes near the sea:-) hugs jan xx

Joseph May
Date: 1/3/2020 6:18:00 PM

Thanks Jan, that's nice to go on moonlight walks..hugs