Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Poet Free verse

Moonlit Pool No H-E-A-D-S

Moonlit pool - 
Icy, wintry
Ignoring my buoy
Ignoring my will
No control
I jump in  
Boggy, limp, put out  
For you
But you point
You run
My tomorrow -
Forlorn 
Lowly I bow 
In my icy, wintry
Moonlit pool
 

By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Eighth place in No Heads or Tails Contest (Jan. 2012)

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Poet Destroyer A March 30, 2013 at 4:26 PM Rhonda, this endures a good flowing verse, enjoyed your poem. Many Blessings with your Featured Poem of the week. By the way no matter my blue color or tune I am always here, spreading the colorful cheer.....Happy Easter!" xox~ LINDA

Vince Suzadail Jr. March 25, 2013 at 1:40 PM Congrats on your featured write,

Kash Poet February 1, 2012 at 3:20 AM Rhonda,congrats on your win in nikko's contest.Good write here.

Kabuteng P.Ink K. January 31, 2012 at 11:42 PM This was such a beautiful and sad write, Rhonda-- I could somehow picture this vividly as well, super congrats on your win! :D Rhonda Johnson-Saunders February 1, 2012 at 1:14 AM Thank you kindly for the placement! Looking forward to the next contest. Blessings, Rhonda

Greg Stanley January 31, 2012 at 2:40 PM Very nicely done Rhonda, congratulations on you win, Greg Rhonda Johnson-Saunders February 1, 2012 at 1:14 AM Thanks, Greg!! Blessings, Rhonda

Carol Sunshine Brown January 31, 2012 at 1:13 PM Congratulations on your super win today in "Nikko's" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol Rhonda Johnson-Saunders January 31, 2012 at 1:38 PM Thank you, Carol!!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl January 31, 2012 at 11:03 AM Good one, Congratulations, x Rhonda Johnson-Saunders January 31, 2012 at 1:37 PM Thanks, Mandy!!!

Wilma Neels January 12, 2012 at 6:34 AM If this is for Missy's contest, wishing you all the best with it :) enjoyed this one!! blessings Wilma :) Rhonda Johnson-Saunders January 12, 2012 at 6:49 AM Thank you, Wilma! Glad you enjoyed it. Blessings :)

Kash Poet January 11, 2012 at 1:33 AM You have done it excellently Rhonda.Love it.Visit my NO HEADS poem 'your inviting look':) Rhonda Johnson-Saunders January 11, 2012 at 6:49 AM Thanks so much! I enjoyed the challenge. Next time I'll try TAILS. Just read 'Your Inviting Look' and loved it!