Moonlit Pond

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Nice use ot that Asian form! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Susan, stopping by to say good night...pd

oh susan, on that one poem of mine about the tough girl. I would have fought her. I was super skinny in those days and not practiced in kick boxing but maybe I'd have kicked her butt off that hill with my strong lets. hahaha (one can only dream) Did you open "about this poem"? If you do that, you can copy and paste my links to the two early poems I wrote (narration) in which I tell the story of what finally happened between me and my rival Margo.

Wonderful! Last line haunts. Best wishes in the contest, dear! Hugs, Cyndi

lovely Tanka, good luck in contest.

lovely tanka, Susan - love the clever last line

Susan - beautiful end. I hope you did mean 'grazing' It fits. love, Kathy

stop wasting your time on these useless forms that have little to no relevence i have seen glimpses of your talent and have come to expect more from you then just short poems filled with fascinating imagery. longer !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Susan, on rereading this one: did you mean to say "grazing" I think you meant gazing. I came here to see if you had new poems. I guess not. If you see any of yours I never read,please let me know. Am betting Joe will be home any second and wondering what to make for dinner! thanks for all the cute comments today. Luv, Andrea

very nice Susan.. I love the last line..love's illusion glimmers..good luck in the contest..Love ..Joseph.

great write!

I love how you made this a "reflection" about love, Susan. Glad I saw it here today.

Wlle done love poem.

Very nice... Terry

Is it romance in the air......?....Lovely done this Tanka poem B.E.Susan. - Wish you luck in contest. - oxox Anne-Lise

Susan looks real to me,..David

nice Black Eye

Good tanka....ahh the question, is it or is it not real?? Enjoyed !!

Wow, this is a powerful symbolic write my friend! I really enjoyed this wonderful poem that you have written so flawlessly! I love how you implied the fact that there is a moon present, I really liked that! This is an amazing write Susan! Great Work!!

Good Morning Susan, from Maryland ;-) ooo WHo, are you passing this Tanka toooo... I like the fitful shimmering light, .. the silver imagery is very captivating. I wonder too about your ending romantic question... WHat ever it is! I like the feelings you compose with your Tanka,, good luck in Ricks, contest... PD