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Moonlit Path

There’s hidden in the lunar glow Enchanting hues not seen by eyes Infused within the shimmered flow Where winsome hopes might shed their guise The path we used to walk by day Emotes of you and glows sublime As muted light starts its ballet Disjoining realms and bending time I’ll find you there my dearest love As moonlight’s gleam unveils a trace Your spirit that has moved above Still whispers soft through moon’s embrace 27 Mar 2014

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Date: 5/3/2014 2:13:00 AM
A delight to read the poem. Congrats on the win, David
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David Mohn
Date: 5/3/2014 8:07:00 AM
Thanks Dr. Ram...glad you liked it
Date: 5/1/2014 10:26:00 PM
Deep poem David! loved the last stanza the most...soul whispering thru' moon's embrace ! congrats on win !
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Date: 5/1/2014 7:01:00 PM
Sweet win David, love it..... Congrats & Hugs ------ Love ~SKAT~
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David Mohn
Date: 5/2/2014 9:29:00 AM
Thanks SKAT, for the comments and sponsoring the contest :)
Date: 4/9/2014 5:52:00 PM
This poem is just wonderful, David! I enjoyed the rhyming and the smooth flow of your words here. The imagery was beautiful, also!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem. :)
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David Mohn
Date: 4/9/2014 6:33:00 PM
Thank you Kelly...I admire your writing and your comments mean alot
Date: 4/1/2014 6:47:00 PM
This is very beautiful....would be a nice one for Gails whispers of love contest....
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Date: 3/28/2014 10:38:00 PM
Very romantic , I'm green with envy .
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David Mohn
Date: 3/28/2014 10:58:00 PM
Thanks Darren for the kind words on this poem and on the other... I appreciate it

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