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Moon-Lit Path

The end of the path, she’s there
Looking truly deceitful
Bright is the moon over her  
Trying to show love

Russell Sivey

Entrant into Brian Strand's “YOUR MY FAVOURITE” contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

September 25, 2011 at 11:57 AM

Congratulations on your win in the contest of Tracie "Dodoitsu Darkness" Russell. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

September 22, 2011 at 1:09 PM

Congrats on your win with this great work..Sara

Tim B

September 22, 2011 at 12:40 PM

Well done Russell, loved this one when I first saw it and put it in my favorites. Not at all surprised of it's first place win. Congratulations!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 22, 2011 at 11:06 AM

Congrats Russell on 1st place win with this dynamic piece ..honored to share with u luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

September 22, 2011 at 4:24 AM

Conmgratulations on the win in the contest of tracie,Russell

Debbie Guzzi

September 21, 2011 at 8:32 PM

ohh maybe the moon will glup her down! the bad woman!! ;) congrad's on your win light & love

Constance La France

September 17, 2011 at 11:17 PM

Short and quite wonderful, best of luck in the contest, and thanks for you ever comments and support of my poetry~~

Jack Horne

September 17, 2011 at 4:22 PM

Clever take on the contest, Russell

Nette Onclaud

September 17, 2011 at 3:25 PM

yup, tracie's contest... see whata migraine can do, lol...:)

Nette Onclaud

September 17, 2011 at 2:56 PM

a show-stopper, russell.. i drool!!. winniong wishes and hugggs! :) nette

Sara Kendrick

September 17, 2011 at 1:57 PM

Reads like a winner..Good luck.Sara

Tim B

September 17, 2011 at 1:00 PM

Russell this was excellent. Such imagery and a captivating glare I can imagine from this cold hearted woman. Love it, thanks for sharing.

Elizabeth Wesley

September 17, 2011 at 10:27 AM

Can it be that deceit would be in a woman's heart under the moonlight? I always think that is the place we are most vulnerable. A different take Russ on the trickery of relationships. I enjoyed this one.