Moonlit Dreams

hand in hand we ran, part our way through the crowd
without a light across the meadow glow
in disbelief, false or true? you’re forced to flee
side by side into the night here we go 

moonlit dreams over the midnight sea
if only we could be
moonlit dreams over the midnight sea
you’re all i need
moonlit dreams over the midnight sea
all i wanna dream
all i wanna dream

far and wide you jumped, doved into the flowing tide
quietly, you held your cries, in need you begged and plead
disappeared before my eyes, now this voodoo spell is under me

moonlit dreams over the midnight sea
if only we could be
moonlit dreams over the midnight sea
you’re all i need
moonlit dreams over the midnight sea
all i wanna dream
all i wanna dream

blue violet hues for us to see 
let us be, let us flee, to the sea

moonlit dreams over the midnight sea
if only we could be
moonlit dreams over the midnight sea
you’re all i need
moonlit dreams over the midnight sea
all i wanna dream
all i wanna dream

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Date: 9/4/2017 9:15:00 PM
Mmm so dreamy! I captured a whole palette of blue in this piece. Ocean and moonlit skies, You painted a beautiful scene.
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Jonathan Moya
Date: 10/30/2017 12:20:00 AM
Thank you! I’m glad you like it. I’ve recorded last week and I’m trying to upload it to soundcloud. I’ll give you the link after.
Date: 8/30/2017 7:19:00 AM
Wonderful song Jonathan, it has a spell-like quality to it; hope it gets what you desire.
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Date: 8/15/2017 5:54:00 PM
Lovely song. In reading it. It seems that there needs not be a repeat of "all i wanna dream." I believe it works better.
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Jonathan Moya
Date: 8/15/2017 8:32:00 PM
yeah, i actually just repeated it so it looks like a poem hehe the actual has a different chorus to it instead of the repeat.:) glad you like it thanks for the advise always appreciated it.
Date: 8/10/2017 8:43:00 AM
A very thoughtful and well versed poetic lyric. Would love to hear the song!
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Jonathan Moya
Date: 8/10/2017 3:40:00 PM
I'll reply to you with a link once i get the chords worked out. The poem version is about a few lines short, but the idea developed from there on.
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