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Moonlit Buffet

Moonlit Buffet Is that laughter I hear floating about in the air or the cooing of the breeze as it teases the willow to dance with giggling glee before the sun sounds its final drum beat and night descends ------------ Inhale deeply….. drown peacefully with pleasure as the honeysuckle and wisteria share their sweet potent scent under cover of darkness beguiling the succulent to come and play ---------------- The softest of whispers hear we now …… the hushed soothing sound in the darkness as the breeze gentles its breath and the spider spins another web with thoughts of prey dancing tautly, wrapped and served warm on her homemade moonlit tray ----------- By: Debra Squyres 5/22/12

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Date: 6/29/2013 10:27:00 PM
Debra, beautiful poem, very dreamy. Congratulations.
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Date: 6/24/2013 1:43:00 PM
Ahhh!! Great descripive poetic quality at the end..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 6/20/2013 7:05:00 PM
I'm with Joyce lots of originality here! a fav too!Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 6/20/2013 5:03:00 PM
Oh this one should have been much higher Debra. I enjoyed it very much. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/7/2013 11:11:00 AM
Debra~i like your poem. Yours truly *SKAT
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Date: 3/1/2013 9:00:00 PM
Debra, thank you very much for considering my 100 % nature contest..Congratulations in showing off Natures true after glow, always~ PD
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Date: 5/30/2012 5:02:00 PM
Let me set the table, said the spider to the bug. I don't care how many legs, you can even be a slug. The moons romantic glow is fine. To set the mood so I can dine. The Louisiana night is here. Won't you please come join me dear. I'm intoxicated with your words Debra. Have yourself a lovely night. :)
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Date: 5/30/2012 12:00:00 PM
Very cool. I see you have an affinity for nature like me!
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Date: 5/28/2012 5:42:00 PM
this piece inspires inner peace :)
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Date: 5/27/2012 9:33:00 PM
as the breeze gentles its breath. WOW. Another very good one for imagery, my friend.
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Date: 5/24/2012 11:21:00 PM
deb is beautiful, i don't how to even discribe it. Love it!!!! *smiles* Ron
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Date: 5/23/2012 5:48:00 PM
exhilarating tonality and mood, debra... all senses alive!..:) huggs!
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