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Moonlit Agony

Such a good thought genuine smile counterfeit, I know solid inward being loaded up with expectations envisions another world my sought motions came true astonishing and unnerving event allowed to divvy in the pleasant moonlight and a bright, sunny day in a lyceum lit dimly and a peaceful snuggle you trusted me to tell me what you think your suffering your sorrow your outflow. beyond hazy vision. and strong cravings. We had a lot in common. I pauperized your heart destroyed your soul apart made you drain Ignoring the past Written: September 26, 2022

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Date: 9/27/2022 9:20:00 AM
You convey great emotions even if not all is right.
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Date: 9/27/2022 8:47:00 AM
Sad that you had to betray someone's trust ! But as long as you feel sorry, you can have new start ! Powerful emotions bautifully presented....
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Date: 9/27/2022 5:20:00 AM
I feel the pain you convey in these verses, Lasaad. Sounds like dissonance of two hearts.
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