Moonlighting In June

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*Image of Shoreline Sunset by Pixabay. Moonlighting In June Doctor Jekyll's special starling, shortly pealed off, started snarling, molting inside, till speaks Miss. Hyde, "Tough to be out cliched, darling." 2022 June 04 *9th Place* The Moon in June (Choose One of Five Forms) ~~Andrea Dietrich: Judged 2022 June 12 *HMS: 8,8,4,4,8

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/14/2022 12:23:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A "Creative" write. What a pretty picture. Guess it is your backyard. Have a great/blessed day.......................

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/14/2022 12:52:00 PM

Your generous sentiments are appreciated, Paula, and may your day be equally enjoyable my friend, Aloha~William

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2022 12:20:00 AM

that was a cute idea, William. I really loved the meter of the punch line!! Congrats for the win in my contest.

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/13/2022 8:39:00 AM

Noted I faulted in some particulars afterward, even so, my friend thanks, Aloha~William

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/4/2022 7:13:00 PM

I loved this William. I needed a laugh today. Thank you. Blessings and Aloha xxoo

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/4/2022 8:10:00 PM

Truly happy am I, Connie, greatly appreciated my friend, Aloha~William