Moonlight Was Shining

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moonlight was shining
radiance was in her hair
golden stars twinkled

birds were still singing
blooms clung to the garden wall
silvery colors

breathtaking tango
past edges of plum twilight
red mars was watching

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/22/2021 5:21:00 PM

Red Mars may have turned green with envy that evening. Nicely penned, Evelyn. Light and Luminescence, Gershon

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/22/2021 8:31:00 PM

Mars only turns green when he's not himself. :0 Thank you for the compliment. Resplendency and Radiance, Evelyn

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 7/9/2021 2:55:00 PM

How creative, Evelyn - a stunning trio of haikus. The picture stands out too! Love ~ Mala

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/9/2021 8:44:00 PM

Thank you, Mala. Your pleasure in this is my delight.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/25/2021 7:27:00 PM

Last verse my favorite…vibrant!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/25/2021 9:51:00 PM

Thank you, Kim. :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/24/2021 8:58:00 PM

A Trio of wonderful haikus Evelyn, love them all.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/25/2021 12:33:00 PM

Thank you for taking the to express your pleasure in this poem, Harry. Blessings, Evelyn

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/24/2021 8:30:00 PM

Brilliantly written, my friend. And a deft use of emotions and pictures, Evelyn, enjoying your lovely artwork. A well-written haiku. It was a pleasure to read.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/25/2021 12:38:00 PM

I am thrilled to hear it, Lasaad. It's so rewarding to know you enjoyed this. Thank you very much. Blessings and hugs, Evelyn

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 6/24/2021 8:08:00 PM

What a lovely picture you painted, Evelyn. Beautifully written Haiku. I really enjoyed reading it. Thank you, I hope your day is as bright and shining as your poem... All Best wishes... Shirley

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/25/2021 12:43:00 PM

Your words bring happiness, Shirley. Thank you for the kind remarks and well wishes. Do have a lovely day yourself. Blessings, Evelyn :)