Premiere Contest WinnerMoonlight Sheets

MOONLIGHT SHEETS after watching circus clowns downtown his light jacket - covered goosebumps her clogs - they shoveled snow they settled in each other’s arms between a mélange of moonlight sheets amoretto’s bow scores poetic words a neophyte-entry subconscious-scrawl he kisses her snowflake-lashes so warm and cold she sips her steamy cup of joe reminiscing her pen pierces twilight an arrow remains on the target with lingering expertise 10/25/2017 Moon Spoon Contest
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Scars Avatar
January 9, 2018 at 11:08 AM
beautiful and uplifting, congrats sweet Kim ;)-luloo
Gauthier Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 7:14 PM
Delightful read. Congrats on your win, Kim.
Hamilton Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 9:14 AM
Very interesting word selection and pairing Kim, very intriguing, congrats on a fine placement!
Gauthier Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 7:51 PM
Wonderful, Kim. Delightful!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 6:06 AM
Thank you Line <3
Haight Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 6:39 PM
A great poem, Kim! Congratulations on your Trophy win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Rodrigues Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 6:06 AM
Thank you Sandra! <3
Barden Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 5:10 AM
Best wishes and congrats on your placement, Kim ... keep writing, friend! :-)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 4:17 PM
Thanks so much, Greg! <3
Allison Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 9:07 PM
Many congrats on the top spot Kim:-) hugs jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 4:27 PM
Thank you Jan <3
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November 17, 2017 at 1:33 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved top win.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 4:27 PM
Thank you Janis! :)
Cozart Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 8:01 AM
Gorgeous, Kim! Congrats on your trophy win!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 8:11 AM
Thank you Dale!
Neumann Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 2:10 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your poem is simply beautiful. Kai
Rodrigues Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 8:11 AM
Thanks Kai!
Chaudhary Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 8:47 AM
So beautiful this poem is........
Rodrigues Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 2:05 PM
Thanks so much Harshita!
Thompson Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 6:11 AM
Sooooo very romantic. One of those poems that makes you sigh and remember the good times.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 6:31 AM
Thank you, Michael!! <3
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 26, 2017 at 9:46 AM
I love the tender romance entwined in your words Kim. A Fave for me! : )
Rodrigues Avatar
October 26, 2017 at 1:30 PM
Thank you Connie! :)
One Avatar
October 26, 2017 at 8:26 AM
now this is lovely imagery... very romantic..
Rodrigues Avatar
October 26, 2017 at 1:30 PM
Thanks Silent! :)
Sathasivam Avatar
October 26, 2017 at 2:51 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 26, 2017 at 5:32 AM
Thank you, Ravi!
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