Moonlight Sheets Premiere Contest Winner

MOONLIGHT SHEETS after watching circus clowns downtown his light jacket - covered goosebumps her clogs - they shoveled snow they settled in each other’s arms between a mélange of moonlight sheets amoretto’s bow scores poetic words a neophyte-entry subconscious-scrawl he kisses her snowflake-lashes so warm and cold she sips her steamy cup of joe reminiscing her pen pierces twilight an arrow remains on the target with lingering expertise 10/25/2017 Moon Spoon Contest
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Date: 1/9/2018 11:08:00 AM
beautiful and uplifting, congrats sweet Kim ;)-luloo
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Date: 1/6/2018 7:14:00 PM
Delightful read. Congrats on your win, Kim.
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Date: 1/6/2018 9:14:00 AM
Very interesting word selection and pairing Kim, very intriguing, congrats on a fine placement!
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Date: 11/18/2017 7:51:00 PM
Wonderful, Kim. Delightful!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/19/2017 6:06:00 AM
Thank you Line <3
Date: 11/18/2017 6:39:00 PM
A great poem, Kim! Congratulations on your Trophy win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/19/2017 6:06:00 AM
Thank you Sandra! <3
Date: 11/18/2017 5:10:00 AM
Best wishes and congrats on your placement, Kim ... keep writing, friend! :-)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/18/2017 4:17:00 PM
Thanks so much, Greg! <3
Date: 11/17/2017 9:07:00 PM
Many congrats on the top spot Kim:-) hugs jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/18/2017 4:27:00 PM
Thank you Jan <3
Date: 11/17/2017 1:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved top win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/18/2017 4:27:00 PM
Thank you Janis! :)
Date: 11/17/2017 8:01:00 AM
Gorgeous, Kim! Congrats on your trophy win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/17/2017 8:11:00 AM
Thank you Dale!
Date: 11/17/2017 2:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your poem is simply beautiful. Kai
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/17/2017 8:11:00 AM
Thanks Kai!
Date: 11/12/2017 8:47:00 AM
So beautiful this poem is........
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/12/2017 2:05:00 PM
Thanks so much Harshita!
Date: 10/31/2017 6:11:00 AM
Sooooo very romantic. One of those poems that makes you sigh and remember the good times.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/31/2017 6:31:00 AM
Thank you, Michael!! <3
Date: 10/26/2017 9:46:00 AM
I love the tender romance entwined in your words Kim. A Fave for me! : )
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/26/2017 1:30:00 PM
Thank you Connie! :)
Date: 10/26/2017 8:26:00 AM
now this is lovely imagery... very romantic..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/26/2017 1:30:00 PM
Thanks Silent! :)
Date: 10/26/2017 2:51:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/26/2017 5:32:00 AM
Thank you, Ravi!
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