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Moonlight Promises

In a garden tended by love and care, beautiful scented roses bloomed as they grew, Under a heart-shaped trellis, two young, sad-faced lovers sat on a bench arguing about a moment of regret, With trembling lips, each pleads for understanding, to forgive and to forget, Neither noticed how a gush of wind scattered the rose petals, showering them with it as it blew. Under the glow of moonlight, promises of sincerity they pledged, Giving clarity to lingering shadows of doubt still making them feel on edge, A tender embrace and whispered words of love reassure, mending trust and professing loyalty, These moments, in memory, reaffirm commitment and give feelings of assurity. Hand in hand, they walked feeling proud that their actions to resolve their issues showed maturity, Living in a world of disposables, both knew they must learn how to bend like the trees when facing the storms of life’s realities. By Zyrool

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 2/22/2025 12:41:00 PM
A beautiful love that can share and resolve its conflicts!
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 2/22/2025 2:40:00 PM
Thank you for dropping by and leaving such kind words, Kim. Greatly appreciated. Have a wonderful weekend, my friend.
Date: 2/21/2025 12:30:00 PM
- A lovely and true poem, Zyrool :) - hugs
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 2/21/2025 1:38:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely words, Anne-Lise. Means a lot. Sending Blessings your way and wishing you a great weekend.
Date: 2/21/2025 10:43:00 AM
A beautiful love story, my friend. Enjoy you weekend Zyrool.
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 2/21/2025 1:36:00 PM
Thank you so much for the visit and your kind words, Jerry. Have a pleasant weekend my friend.
Date: 2/19/2025 10:45:00 AM
Dear Zyrool, your poignant poem is a beautiful expression of love, compassion and commitment where communication, remorse and forgiveness is needed to grow and sustain a true, rich and deep love. Your last three lines are a grand finale to an exceptional piece. Warmest wishes my poet friend.. ~Susan
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 2/19/2025 3:59:00 PM
Hello Susan, I am touched by your beautiful comment. Your have given a boost to my confidence. Thank you. Sending Blessings your way, my friend.
Date: 2/19/2025 10:42:00 AM
Deep thoughts. Great reflections in this poem where emotions rule.
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 2/19/2025 3:53:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely words, Victor. Much appreciated. Sending Blessings your way, my friend.
Date: 2/18/2025 6:50:00 AM
Ahh!! How real this one is. Filled with deep emotions. Creative for sure. Thanks for sharing. Sara K
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 2/18/2025 7:08:00 AM
Thank you for the read, and your kind words, Sara. Stay Blessed, my friend. Enjoy your day.
Date: 2/17/2025 9:24:00 PM
I felt this to be excellent in thought and rhyme. You opened an area of relationships that many forget, that being sensitivity and adapting. True love will win.
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 2/18/2025 5:50:00 AM
Hello Hilda, thank you for your lovely words. You’re so right true love will win. This was about a young couple I met on a holiday. We were in a group.They kinda adopted me. Have a great day my friend.
Date: 2/17/2025 7:14:00 AM
Such brilliant cadence throughout your well articulated lines and your profound poem ; that emanates so much depth! I especially love "they must learn how to bend like the trees when facing the storms of life’s realities." So true! Soulfully moving! Pleasure reading this, dear poetic soul. Sending you light always
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 2/17/2025 8:39:00 AM
Hello IE, on this cold and dreary day your beautiful words have cheered me up, I was quite pleased with those lines that you highlighted. Sending you Blessings and wishing you a wonderful new week ahead, my friend.

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