Notes About The Poem

image from PicturesToLove

MOONLIGHT ON MY LAPTOP

MOONLIGHT ON MY LAPTOP ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
in twilight's hallowed hour the world outside recedes. glowing screen, a window wide. virtual realm opens. moonbeams dance upon reflections of code and thought. I soar, a bird on outstretched wings through skies of endless blue. laptop’s keys play a symphony~ my inner voice, a creative song. the laptop's shining face a mirror to my soul, a gateway to hidden depths, a sacred place. in dawn’s approaching hour, screen’s embers fade flickering flames of creativity their embers will soon turn cold.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Fowler Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 2:30 PM
Very cool dear Sara. The metaphor is well-taken and apropos! Working at night is often the best time for reflection and self-inspection. :)
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 6:17 PM
thank you, Linda...glad you appreciated the metaphor and understood the 'late night' writing marathons. wishing you a splendid evening, Sara
Gauthier Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 8:16 AM
Sweet ~ long hours of creativity bringing on sleep ~
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 6:16 PM
yes, 'tis true....some times my brain is just mush -- emotionally exhausted from writing :-)
Andresen Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 4:42 AM
- Lovely with moonlight sparkling in your eyes, Sara :) - hugs
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 6:16 PM
thank you so much!
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace