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Moonlight or Sunrise contest Sponsored by Ink Empress

Moonlight on Meadows



Luna sings sweetly 
when the sun goes down…

…and the stars light up against 
the black velvet of the empyrean.

Others view Luna 
with a judgemental frown…

…they approve only sunlight songs
 in hues of yellow and tangerine.

When will we see with our hearts 
and hear music with the love we hold there?

When will the ethereal light 
of the moon on meadows here
 be thought as beautiful 
as that glaring sun of theirs?

The moonlight is gentle, 
it sings to us of lovers and lakes. 

Of both beneath those graceful beams, 
in a boat being rocked to sleep. 

It softens her features, 
giving much more than it takes.

Luna in the arms of another
 in the moonlight on meadows and lakes…
 …Over what eternity keeps.
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Goldsmith Avatar
September 5, 2024 at 9:43 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Have a blessed day writing away................
Empress Avatar
September 5, 2024 at 6:55 AM
Dear crystol, this started off so beautifully and also the way youv written about the moon is stunning! I especially love “The moonlight is gentle, it sings to us of lovers and lakes. “ just love that and many can resonate! Thank you for sharing! Congratulations on your win
Woods Avatar
September 5, 2024 at 7:40 AM
Oh thank you so much! I enjoyed this contest and appreciate the writing prompt... I've been able to write so much more with the contests on ps! Xoxo
Mcconnell Avatar
August 26, 2024 at 3:21 AM
Lovely pen Crystol, really good imagery and expression. Hope all is well, blessings,Gordon
Woods Avatar
August 26, 2024 at 1:52 PM
Hey there Gordon! Long time! Thanks for visiting and the lovely comment... will visit you soon! Xo
Ashley Avatar
August 25, 2024 at 12:57 PM
Dear Crystol, the beauty of moonlight glows in the magic of your imagery. I enjoyed the contrast between sunlight and moonlight. I especially enjoyed "The moonlight is gentle, / it sings to us of lovers and lakes" indeed it does, and your lovely verse sings to me of "moonlight on meadows". I am enraptured by moonlight too. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
Woods Avatar
August 25, 2024 at 1:41 PM
Susan!!!! It's soo good to hear from you! Tysm for your complimentary comments... you always make me smile. Blessings to you! Xo
One Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 11:31 AM
Stunning poetry...
Woods Avatar
August 25, 2024 at 1:38 PM
Wow that's quite a compliment from a poet I hold in awe! It's so good of you to encourage me and I'm grateful! Xo
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