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For Ink Empress, Moonlight or Sunrise poetry contest.

 

My heart remains asleep, until you touch it... (poet) You are the most' enigmatic existence,' which will never be mine. I remain a million waves away, trying to make beauty from your scars. Love is a reflective remedy in a world veiled behind hateful hallucinations. Envious eyes are an enemy in episodes of egression. As you are a mistress of midnight, and I, a dahlia rejoicing in daylight. To the one who has composed an enchanted poem with silken whispers, concealed within the silent chambers of my sentiments, lets go to a place where we can engrave our own molten bronze memoirs, where death can never keep us apart. An eternal paradise for just me and you, where the hidden passages of unheard chapters, no longer remain unspoken and untouched. Kiss me like moonlight on meadows, caressing each blade of my oasis in shimmering, silvery sensations. Knowing my memories will appear at dawn, in the form of dewdrops. When aroused embers emerge, uncontrollable words flow on virgin fibers, as each intimate beat of hypnotic hearts, floats along psychedelic paths of harmony, where perpetual petals blossom like rainbows. Heavenly scents scintillate senses, as glittering butterflies float like our souls, with shadows of satin stars serenading our spellbound, sensual, sparkling spirits, in realms with breathless nights and velvet sighs echoing like lulling lullabies. Each scribe springs into life in vivid visions, like a divine dance, easing us into a tranquil trance. A place called forever, illustrating immortal vows, overwhelming like a Michelangelo masterpiece, outliving the breaths of time in pristine clarity.

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Date: 2/1/2025 3:31:00 PM
I love reading your romance. It speaks in ways I understand. "To the one who has composed an enchanted poem with silken whispers, concealed within the silent chambers of my sentiments, lets go to a place where we can engrave our own molten bronze memoirs, where death can never keep us apart. This is unusual and very creatively done. I love the alliterations. "our spellbound, sensual, sparkling spirits, in realms with breathless nights and velvet sighs echoing like lulling lullabies."
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Date: 9/5/2024 9:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful "Moonlight on Meadows" write. You are to writing, as Michelangelo was to painting. Have a blessed day writing away..............
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Date: 9/5/2024 5:39:00 AM
Dear silent one, you , i dont know how you do it make the readers heart beat and race fast as we read with such deep emotions! Truly impressive and heart touching! Left me in awe breathless! We thought this was sweet too! And the quote on top really made me feel so much! I love poems that make me feel while also using so many poetic techniques! Impeccable write! With such seamless alliterations, metaphors and imagery, and such romance! This, is like a Michelangelo masterpiece! A fave! Congratulations
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Date: 8/27/2024 1:41:00 PM
Very real- written from the heart, Silent
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Date: 8/25/2024 10:43:00 AM
A great romantic write with so much feeling behind the words. love phyl
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Date: 8/24/2024 5:13:00 PM
Such romantic lines,,,,was caught up in the magic.Many beautiful images. Nice reading your words again. SuZ
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Date: 8/23/2024 1:10:00 PM
SO, what a sensual delight of "velvet sighs," kisses "like moonlight on meadows," "perpetual petals blossom like rainbows." Your images shimmer like moonlight with glowing alliterations in a freshness that exudes from your words. This entry to the contest is "divine" and breathtaking and so romantic! Best wishes for a win. Sending you blessings of joy!
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