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Moonlight On Magnolias

Moonlight on magnolias, cream on cream
in the breathless hours of raven midnight.
So caught up in fragrant, dreamy delight
in beauty fraught, satin, platinum beams.
Darkness can be so much more than it seems
bringing beauteous, hidden truths to light,
Moonlight on magnolias.

In dusky shadows, fantasies take flight
in the hours of springtime's deep green regime.
Then stars twinkle, and pearl moon is agleam,
and in raisin darkness, pure white on white-
Moonlight on magnolias.


Written on 10/23/2022
For: Rousing Rondine Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Jeff Kyser
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Anaya Avatar
November 28, 2022 at 8:13 AM
Belated congratulations on your win Evelyn! Your distinctive style, "raisin darkness" fresh and so alive! Happy Holidays! :D
Buehler Avatar
November 28, 2022 at 10:15 AM
Thank you very much for your warm words of congratulations, Anaya. Season's Greetings! Evelyn
Fowler Avatar
November 22, 2022 at 7:05 AM
Lovely and inviting sight Evelyn. Congratulations on your win! :)
Buehler Avatar
November 28, 2022 at 10:16 AM
Thank you so much, Linda. :)
Alex Avatar
November 21, 2022 at 6:56 PM
"raisin darkness" - Beautiful!
Buehler Avatar
November 21, 2022 at 9:17 PM
Thank you, Christuraj. Have a blessed Thanksgiving. :)
Roper Avatar
November 21, 2022 at 3:46 PM
Beautiful, Evelyn, congratulations on your win. Blessing friend
Buehler Avatar
November 21, 2022 at 4:24 PM
Thank you very much, Eve. Happy holidays.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 21, 2022 at 7:27 AM
Congratulations, Evelyn! That first line shines as do you!
Buehler Avatar
November 21, 2022 at 12:00 PM
I appreciate your warm remarks, Kim.
Miller Avatar
November 21, 2022 at 6:36 AM
Beautiful, poem, congratulations
Buehler Avatar
November 21, 2022 at 12:01 PM
Thank you, Terry. :)
Kyser Avatar
November 21, 2022 at 4:46 AM
This had such a nice flow and imagery - congrats on your first placement in the rondine contest!
Buehler Avatar
November 21, 2022 at 12:04 PM
Thank you so much for the compliment and warm congratulations, Jeff. I enjoyed your contest immensely.
Ligon Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 4:11 PM
Such a lovely scene, moonlight's majestic glow upon magnolias.
Buehler Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 4:20 PM
Thank you for your precious comment, Juliet. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 1:03 PM
Another beauty!
Buehler Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 4:07 PM
Thank you for your fine compliment. :)
Tor Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 4:29 PM
This is lovely Evelyn. Love how you used the moon and the night to showcase the beauty of the magnolias. This is a favorite for me Evelyn. Thank you so much for posting. Have a lovely evening, and be blessed my Dear...
Buehler Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 6:47 PM
You are welcome, dear friend. Thank you for you lovely comments, and for the honor of a fave. Have a blessed week, Evelyn :)
Anaya Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 2:01 PM
Dreamy and elegant! "Sugar Magnolia" a song I used to love and would go lovely with your amazing poem. ;)
Buehler Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 6:54 PM
Thank you so much, Anaya. Sugar Magnolia sounds like a pretty song, which I will be listening to. Enjoy your week, Evelyn :)
Y. Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 10:48 AM
WoW! Evelyn, This is just breathtaking! I love Magnolias, and I enjoyed the view. Best wishes in the contest. Enjoy the rest of your day-Alexis
Buehler Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 11:42 AM
Thank you very much for the joy of your comment today, Alexis. Have a wonderful day yourself, Evelyn
Poet Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 7:36 AM
Magnolias are already breathtakingly gorgeous, but their size adds to their allure. This poem is just stunning thanks for your work and for sharing, Dear Evelyn.
Buehler Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 11:43 AM
You are more than welcome, Lasaad, and your appreciation is extra nice. Evelyn
Buhagiar Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 3:29 AM
Magnolias are rare in Malta. They are such a beautiful species. Lovely poem.
Buehler Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 11:46 AM
Thank goodness that most places, even deserts, have some types of flowers. Flowers are hardier than they look. Thank you for the nice compliment. :)
Roper Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 9:31 PM
Magnolias are so beautiful , the size makes it even more appealing. You've made it beautiful in this verse. Blessings friend.
Buehler Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 9:35 PM
Thank you so much for your gratifying response, Eve. Blessings and hugs.
Mccann Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 7:52 PM
Moonlight on Magnolias is such a great phrase, it must be difficult to write a poem that stands up to it... But you did! Elizabeth
Buehler Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 9:37 PM
Thank you very much for your kind thoughts, Elizabeth. :)
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