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Moonlight Delight

Shine moon please shine on Let them sleep in moonlight peace All day they laboured in fields Now your amber hand Fondles them into sweet dreams Linger delicious moon, please For the Contest :Moonlight Delight Written today: 8 September 2017

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 9/13/2017 10:49:00 PM

Beautiful imagery, and a wonderful write, Probir - blessings and congrats on your win, my friend! :-)

Pat Adams

Date: 9/12/2017 4:00:00 PM

Very nice and a perfect example of a Sedoka!! Smartly written! Congratulations, well done!

Jan Allison

Date: 9/10/2017 4:28:00 PM

Such lovely imagery Probir congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/9/2017 7:10:00 PM

Wow! Probir this is awesome in beauty and content. Your imagery and expression is gorgeous. Poetic bliss my friend! :)

Eve Roper

Date: 9/9/2017 4:06:00 PM

The imagery is great in this beautiful verse, Probir, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/9/2017 2:13:00 PM

- Congratulations on your beautiful 5th place, Probir :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/9/2017 8:36:00 AM

Congrats!!! my friend...lovely write...yahoo!!!...^WW^

Anisha Dutta

Date: 9/9/2017 8:03:00 AM

Congrats Probir to win

John Michaels

Date: 9/9/2017 6:25:00 AM

Great stuff, Probir! Congrats on your win. Regards, John.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/9/2017 6:13:00 AM

Congrats Probir!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/8/2017 12:57:00 PM

- Lovely poem, Probir - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/8/2017 8:40:00 AM

Lovely, Probir! A blissful sleep after the harvest.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/8/2017 7:25:00 AM

Lovely poem Probir--delicate--good luck for a win!