Probir Gupta Poet Sedoka

Moonlight Delight

Shine moon please shine on
Let them sleep in moonlight peace
All day they laboured in fields

Now your amber hand
Fondles them into sweet dreams
Linger delicious moon, please


For the Contest :Moonlight Delight
Written today: 8 September 2017

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Gregory Richard Barden September 13, 2017 at 10:49 PM Beautiful imagery, and a wonderful write, Probir - blessings and congrats on your win, my friend! :-)

Pat Adams September 12, 2017 at 4:00 PM Very nice and a perfect example of a Sedoka!! Smartly written! Congratulations, well done!

Jan Allison September 10, 2017 at 4:28 PM Such lovely imagery Probir congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Susan Ashley September 9, 2017 at 7:10 PM Wow! Probir this is awesome in beauty and content. Your imagery and expression is gorgeous. Poetic bliss my friend! :)

Eve Roper September 9, 2017 at 4:06 PM The imagery is great in this beautiful verse, Probir, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*

Anne-Lise Andresen September 9, 2017 at 2:13 PM - Congratulations on your beautiful 5th place, Probir :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior September 9, 2017 at 8:36 AM Congrats!!! my friend...lovely write...yahoo!!!...^WW^

Anisha Dutta September 9, 2017 at 8:03 AM Congrats Probir to win

John Michaels September 9, 2017 at 6:25 AM Great stuff, Probir! Congrats on your win. Regards, John.

Vijay Pandit September 9, 2017 at 6:13 AM Congrats Probir!

Anne-Lise Andresen September 8, 2017 at 12:57 PM - Lovely poem, Probir - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues September 8, 2017 at 8:40 AM Lovely, Probir! A blissful sleep after the harvest.

Vijay Pandit September 8, 2017 at 7:25 AM Lovely poem Probir--delicate--good luck for a win!