Nette Onclaud Poet Tanka

Moonlight Ballet

rides on carousels
gently tick of fairy hops
technicolor dance...
tiptoeing inside hushed sleep
hazes of  moonlight ballet 




Fantasy Contest of Skat ( tanka)
by nette onclaud

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 30, 2012 at 9:35 PM congrats Nedtte luv on another phenom first place win.. sooo smooth..luv..

Jon Arno January 30, 2012 at 2:06 PM Congratulations on your great write :) Jon

Lizanne Scholtz January 30, 2012 at 11:15 AM Congratulations Nette on your win, lovely poem, best wishes Elizabeth

Bob Quigley January 30, 2012 at 10:31 AM Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Nette.

Carol Sunshine Brown January 30, 2012 at 7:24 AM Congratulations on your placement Nette. Love, Carol

Kash Poet January 30, 2012 at 5:34 AM Amazing poetry by you Nette.Congrats on your 1st place win.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl January 30, 2012 at 3:03 AM Congratulations nette (catching up after my week away so sorry if I'm late) x

Carol Sunshine Brown December 6, 2011 at 11:19 AM Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Moonlight Dreams" contest Nette. Love, Carol

Bob Quigley December 4, 2011 at 8:47 AM Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Nette.

Bl Devnath December 4, 2011 at 3:56 AM Congratulation on your win, my friend.bl

Russell Sivey December 2, 2011 at 9:13 AM Wow Nette, you sure have outdone yourself this time! You know how to write a poem with a punch to it. Your descriptions sure bring about great visions to my mind and I enjoy them immensely! Awesome Work!

Phyllis Babcock December 2, 2011 at 8:44 AM Loved your write Nette. Good luck in the contest. love phyl

Tony Lane December 2, 2011 at 6:41 AM Some of us hit delta very quickly and stay there for quite a long time. Makes for interesting nights.