Sara Kendrick Poet Tanka

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Memories...

Moonlight and Dragonflies

purple afterglow
love those dragonflies dipping
in ponds cool water

while we loved in soft moonlight
lovers on that summer's eve

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Sponsor: ^Rick Parise
Contest: Let's Pass a Tanka Love Note

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Debra Falgout May 24, 2012 at 1:37 PM Ohhh,,pretty,,i love dragonflies,,we have huge ones here,,great capture,,love debra

Debbie Duncan May 23, 2012 at 2:36 AM nice,,,, very nice ;} good luck ;}

Jack Horne May 22, 2012 at 1:48 PM what a beautiful romantic piece, Sara - a sure winner

Poet Destroyer A May 22, 2012 at 1:07 PM Sara, this is very beautiful,, good luck in the contest...

Nette Onclaud May 22, 2012 at 11:47 AM you give a sweet kind of hugh, sara.. all the best over at rick's and huggs!..:)

Nathan D. May 22, 2012 at 8:57 AM good luck in contest very bueatiful piece you have here

Andrea Dietrich May 21, 2012 at 10:29 PM simply beautiful.

Nathan D. May 21, 2012 at 5:35 PM Beautiful & good luck hugs" nate

Russell Sivey May 21, 2012 at 3:47 PM This is a glorious write my friend! I really enjoyed the creativity of the dragonflies and their ritual of dipping into the cool pond water! What a lover's paradise you have described Sara! I love this poem a lot! Great Work!!

John Loving Iii May 21, 2012 at 3:17 PM thank you. i'll make the change as soon as i can.

John Loving Iii May 21, 2012 at 2:52 PM this will make a nice entry in the contest.

Daver Austin May 21, 2012 at 2:28 PM Romantic setting - colorful. Love, daver

Anne-Lise Andresen May 21, 2012 at 1:15 PM Those who wait for something good, does not wait in vain Sara. - oxox love Anne-Lise Anne-Lise Andresen May 21, 2012 at 2:40 PM Wish you luck in contest !!! Anne-Lise Andresen May 21, 2012 at 2:39 PM I do not wait in vain Sara, sweet and beautiful poem - love it. - Thank you for visit my poem and for comments it. - oxox love Anne-Lise - Take care.