Moonbeams

 It seems
 in dreams
 moonbeams
 bring gleams
 Seems in dreams we take heavenly flight
 As moonbeams bring gleams to the dark night

 2-25-2024

moontyburn

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Andrea Dietrich

February 27, 2024 at 12:53 PM

This seems a little different from standard Tyburn; however, I like it very much. And how you ended with the longer extra rhymed couplet.

Heidi Sands

February 27, 2024 at 7:00 AM

Beautiful poem. Nice gleams in the dark night :)

Brandy Nicole

February 26, 2024 at 8:24 PM

In dreams, anything is possible. :) When ' moonbeams ' dance through the night, it's like poetry in motion. Beautiful in every way. Your thoughts bring a smile, Joseph. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Vijay Pandit

February 26, 2024 at 6:38 AM

Fabulous poetry, Joseph: --Seems in dreams we take heavenly flight As moonbeams bring gleams to the dark night---

Hilda Greenhough

February 25, 2024 at 1:51 PM

The moon has magical powers, perhaps because of its magnetic effect. You nailed the style, tyburn. The subject of dreams wafted over me like a cool, quiet night.

Karen Jones

February 25, 2024 at 1:27 PM

Creative!

Moonbeams

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