Moonbeams

It seems in dreams moonbeams bring gleams Seems in dreams we take heavenly flight As moonbeams bring gleams to the dark night 2-25-2024

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/27/2024 12:53:00 PM

This seems a little different from standard Tyburn; however, I like it very much. And how you ended with the longer extra rhymed couplet.

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/27/2024 7:00:00 AM

Beautiful poem. Nice gleams in the dark night :)

Brandy Nicole

Date: 2/26/2024 8:24:00 PM

In dreams, anything is possible. :) When ' moonbeams ' dance through the night, it's like poetry in motion. Beautiful in every way. Your thoughts bring a smile, Joseph. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/26/2024 5:27:00 PM

I'm not familiar with this form, but I like what you've done here...loved the last two lines....very well crafted. enjoy your evening, Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/26/2024 6:38:00 AM

Fabulous poetry, Joseph: --Seems in dreams we take heavenly flight As moonbeams bring gleams to the dark night---

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 2/25/2024 1:51:00 PM

The moon has magical powers, perhaps because of its magnetic effect. You nailed the style, tyburn. The subject of dreams wafted over me like a cool, quiet night.

Karen Jones

Date: 2/25/2024 1:27:00 PM

Creative!