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Moonbeam Departures

Moonbeam departures 

A chilly morning
greets me beneath
 silent springtime skies
of fading stars
and moon beam departures
as another new day
finds me 
thinking of you

And as I quietly gaze
across sunrise glimmers
tickling distant weary fields
to the northern horizon
my thoughts change
as I wonder. . .
if you are thinking
of me too

Good morning Soupers

good morningfree verse

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Dorian Petersen Potter

June 29, 2017 at 4:56 AM

Hi Chris!:))Very beautifully written romantic, passionate, heart touching, good morning love poem:) So captivating! Just beautiful!:) I truly enjoyed reading this one again from you Chris. A 7 + + ! A fav. All the best always!Spill ink! For sure I'll be back and continue reading more of your very beautiful poetry, my friend Chris:))Wishing you a very lovely week! In his light God bless you always!:))D

Chris Green

June 29, 2017 at 8:39 AM

Thank you for all of the kindness that show to me. I appreciate your visits to my work.

Connie Marcum Wong

May 31, 2017 at 2:43 PM

Yes....thinking of you too this morning. I love the soft glow of the moon as it departs and the fading stars. Ah, to begin another day with an amazing poem! Thank you my friend! 7 ; )

Chris Green

May 31, 2017 at 3:11 PM

Thank you so very much Connie for the nice comment and the big smile I am now wearing. :)

Lenna Walker

May 31, 2017 at 10:48 AM

So much of your writing has wonderful romantic images and thought. I love seeing your creative lines- My fav in this one is 'sunrise glimmers tickling distant weary fields' . Beautiful as ever Chris !! :)

Chris Green

May 31, 2017 at 10:52 AM

Thank you Lenna. You always make me smile when you visit. I am happy you liked this one and that line...it's funny the things I see when I take the time to really look. :)

Joanna Daniel

May 31, 2017 at 9:58 AM

I'm thinking...of course, this is beautiful, Chris:)

Chris Green

May 31, 2017 at 10:47 AM

Of course. :) Thanks so very much my friend. I am happy you liked this one.

Tim Smith

May 31, 2017 at 9:58 AM

She is looking back with a warm heart.

Chris Green

May 31, 2017 at 10:46 AM

Thanks so much Tim.

Heidi Sands

May 31, 2017 at 9:16 AM

I think White Wolf may be referring to a nice Tribute Alexis wrote ?

Chris Green

May 31, 2017 at 10:46 AM

I know. :)

Heidi Sands

May 31, 2017 at 9:15 AM

Another beautiful poem. I am sure she is thinking of you too. Good morning Chris :)

Chris Green

May 31, 2017 at 10:46 AM

Thanks so very much my friend. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one today.

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 31, 2017 at 9:04 AM

- God morgen til deg, Chris :) - A windy and chilly day here with me - A lovely poems ... without rating :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green

May 31, 2017 at 10:46 AM

Good morning Anne Lise. Thank you for your kindness my friend. It is rainy here but not as chilly as my poem might indicate. :)

Akkina Downing

May 31, 2017 at 8:41 AM

Hafa Adai- good morning to you too Mr Green. It may be raining and chilly by me but thinking about that sunrise glimmers a distant away is giving me hope of anytime now it'll shine thru those dark clouds. Lol! So beautiful my friend, but of course as always. Keep warm and smile :) hugs, Kina

Chris Green

May 31, 2017 at 10:45 AM

Good morning Kina. Thank you my friend, I am happy my poem has you thinking of beautiful times ahead, because it is always a beautiful time for me when you stop by.

Dale Gregory Cozart

May 31, 2017 at 8:33 AM

This poem really works for me. Good job.

Chris Green

May 31, 2017 at 10:44 AM

Thanks Dale, glad you liked it.

Chuck Melugin

May 31, 2017 at 8:21 AM

Chris...You write and I'm left.....in admiration. Moonbeam Departures bring thoughts of togetherness and smiles. 7 my best to you, chuck

Chris Green

May 31, 2017 at 10:44 AM

Thanks so much Chuck for your kind comment today. I appreciate your visit.

Darren White

May 31, 2017 at 8:17 AM

It is something I am forever wondering about too... is my boyfriend thinking about me across the distance? As much as I am thinking about him? Does he miss me? As much as I miss him? And the answer is yes. Yes, he does. Good morning, Chris :)

Chris Green

May 31, 2017 at 10:41 AM

That is a good thing then. :) Thanks so much Darren.

White Wolf

May 31, 2017 at 7:55 AM

Good morning to you, Chris! It's always a pleasure reading your wonderful poetry! Another great write my friend! PS. Read Heidi's poem called Tribute!

Chris Green

May 31, 2017 at 10:40 AM

Thanks so much Rick. I appreciate you stopping by. I did read (Alexis' poem) :) That was really a nice thing for her to do.