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Moonbeam Departures

Moonbeam departures A chilly morning greets me beneath silent springtime skies of fading stars and moon beam departures as another new day finds me thinking of you And as I quietly gaze across sunrise glimmers tickling distant weary fields to the northern horizon my thoughts change as I wonder. . . if you are thinking of me too Good morning Soupers

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Date: 6/29/2017 4:56:00 AM
Hi Chris!:))Very beautifully written romantic, passionate, heart touching, good morning love poem:) So captivating! Just beautiful!:) I truly enjoyed reading this one again from you Chris. A 7 + + ! A fav. All the best always!Spill ink! For sure I'll be back and continue reading more of your very beautiful poetry, my friend Chris:))Wishing you a very lovely week! In his light God bless you always!:))D
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Chris Green
Date: 6/29/2017 8:39:00 AM
Thank you for all of the kindness that show to me. I appreciate your visits to my work.
Date: 5/31/2017 2:43:00 PM
Yes....thinking of you too this morning. I love the soft glow of the moon as it departs and the fading stars. Ah, to begin another day with an amazing poem! Thank you my friend! 7 ; )
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Date: 5/31/2017 3:11:00 PM
Thank you so very much Connie for the nice comment and the big smile I am now wearing. :)
Date: 5/31/2017 10:48:00 AM
So much of your writing has wonderful romantic images and thought. I love seeing your creative lines- My fav in this one is 'sunrise glimmers tickling distant weary fields' . Beautiful as ever Chris !! :)
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Date: 5/31/2017 10:52:00 AM
Thank you Lenna. You always make me smile when you visit. I am happy you liked this one and that line...it's funny the things I see when I take the time to really look. :)
Date: 5/31/2017 9:58:00 AM
I'm thinking...of course, this is beautiful, Chris:)
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Date: 5/31/2017 10:47:00 AM
Of course. :) Thanks so very much my friend. I am happy you liked this one.
Date: 5/31/2017 9:58:00 AM
She is looking back with a warm heart.
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Date: 5/31/2017 10:46:00 AM
Thanks so much Tim.
Date: 5/31/2017 9:16:00 AM
I think White Wolf may be referring to a nice Tribute Alexis wrote ?
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Date: 5/31/2017 10:46:00 AM
I know. :)
Date: 5/31/2017 9:15:00 AM
Another beautiful poem. I am sure she is thinking of you too. Good morning Chris :)
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Date: 5/31/2017 10:46:00 AM
Thanks so very much my friend. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one today.
Date: 5/31/2017 9:04:00 AM
- God morgen til deg, Chris :) - A windy and chilly day here with me - A lovely poems ... without rating :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/31/2017 10:46:00 AM
Good morning Anne Lise. Thank you for your kindness my friend. It is rainy here but not as chilly as my poem might indicate. :)
Date: 5/31/2017 8:41:00 AM
Hafa Adai- good morning to you too Mr Green. It may be raining and chilly by me but thinking about that sunrise glimmers a distant away is giving me hope of anytime now it'll shine thru those dark clouds. Lol! So beautiful my friend, but of course as always. Keep warm and smile :) hugs, Kina
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Date: 5/31/2017 10:45:00 AM
Good morning Kina. Thank you my friend, I am happy my poem has you thinking of beautiful times ahead, because it is always a beautiful time for me when you stop by.
Date: 5/31/2017 8:33:00 AM
This poem really works for me. Good job.
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Date: 5/31/2017 10:44:00 AM
Thanks Dale, glad you liked it.
Date: 5/31/2017 8:21:00 AM
Chris...You write and I'm left.....in admiration. Moonbeam Departures bring thoughts of togetherness and smiles. 7 my best to you, chuck
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Date: 5/31/2017 10:44:00 AM
Thanks so much Chuck for your kind comment today. I appreciate your visit.
Date: 5/31/2017 8:17:00 AM
It is something I am forever wondering about too... is my boyfriend thinking about me across the distance? As much as I am thinking about him? Does he miss me? As much as I miss him? And the answer is yes. Yes, he does. Good morning, Chris :)
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Date: 5/31/2017 10:41:00 AM
That is a good thing then. :) Thanks so much Darren.
Date: 5/31/2017 7:55:00 AM
Good morning to you, Chris! It's always a pleasure reading your wonderful poetry! Another great write my friend! PS. Read Heidi's poem called Tribute!
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Date: 5/31/2017 10:40:00 AM
Thanks so much Rick. I appreciate you stopping by. I did read (Alexis' poem) :) That was really a nice thing for her to do.
Date: 5/31/2017 7:26:00 AM
Bonjour Chris, your morning may be chilly but your verses are warm and inspiring :)Amitiés
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Chris Green
Date: 5/31/2017 10:39:00 AM
Thank you so very much Anne Marie. I am happy you found a little warmth in my words today.

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