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Moonbathing

A good friend told me "Tonight is perfect for moon bathing, " So I am lying in the backyard Buck naked on a mended blanket and praying to God my neighbor Has gone away for the weekend. THIRD PLACE WINNER June 13, 2021 submitted to "BITE SIZE POEM #6" Poetry Contest sponsored by Line Gautier FIFTH PLACE WINNER December 20, 2020 submitted to "MAKE ME LAUGH WITH SOME HUMOR" Poetry Contest sponsored by Tania Kitchin FEATURED POETRY SOUP POEM March 20, 2022

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Greg Gaul

Date: 6/13/2021 10:30:00 AM

Whenever you write what everyone is thinking yet hasn't written yet, you know you've got something good. Great humor, very clever. Congrats.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/13/2021 12:08:00 PM

Thanks so much, Greg. It WAS an enjoyable write and one of my favorites of all my poems.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/13/2021 9:50:00 AM

Okaaay! Now that is clever and just plain funny Milt! Hopefully the moon is not blushing! Moon screen anyone! Reminds of a story about a friend who chased his runaway rabbit in bunny slippers and his wife's fuzzy pink robe! Still grinning! Congrats!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/13/2021 10:13:00 AM

Thanks, Sam. Believe it or not, this is one of my favorite poems I've ever written. I don't know why!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/13/2021 7:49:00 AM

Really laughed. Congratulations!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/13/2021 7:53:00 AM

So glad you got a good laugh out of it, Chris. If I keep entering it, someday it might make a first place win! You think?