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Moon To My Stars

Everyone wants to be the sun All I need is that one person who wants to be the ambient glow to my twinkling starlight so in the darkest of nights we can shine together stealing the night skies back with our brilliance

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Robert Lindley

Date: 9/13/2019 9:08:00 AM

You hit a very high mark with this one my friend. So much packed into so few verses. God bless.... A fav... a sweet gem too...

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/13/2019 9:11:00 AM

Thank you Robert! So glad you stopped by!;)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/4/2019 2:49:00 PM

Hello Brenda Chirl, just by reading this poem, I felt like i was on a journey with you. have a nice day my friend.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/5/2019 1:12:00 AM

Thank you Darlene I do appreciate your warm comment!;)

Nick Trim

Date: 8/28/2019 6:14:00 AM

everyone is saying romantic, I say kinky, kinky twinky star you write just like a Wonderbra, pushed above and out so far, you should meet my Milkybar lol good muff... I mean stuff.... stuff your muff.....great poetry

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/5/2019 1:16:00 AM

Lol ok then muppet!;)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/5/2019 1:14:00 AM

WK if I bottle it can I sell it? Haha! What is a poem if one can not be kinky twinky or carnal?;)

Nick Trim
Date: 9/1/2019 7:27:00 PM

errr poetic, its a parody twinkle twinkle little star cus you're a star, and you have too take these opportunities on soup, and i'm you stick not your poetry benda ok lol

Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/28/2019 8:21:00 PM

WK lol Nick is always giving me grief over my poetry! Lol! Such a muppet! Hahaha!;)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/28/2019 11:11:00 AM

Lmao! Muppet I swear you always make me laugh with you errrr poetic? Lol comments!;) thx muppet!;)