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Moon To My Stars

Everyone wants to be the sun
All I need is that one person 
who wants to be the ambient glow 
to my twinkling starlight so 
in the darkest of nights we can 
shine together stealing the 
night skies back with our brilliance

Copyright © Brenda Chiri | Year Posted 2019

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Robert Lindley Date: 9/13/2019 9:08:00 AM You hit a very high mark with this one my friend. So much packed into so few verses. God bless.... A fav... a sweet gem too... Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 9/13/2019 9:11:00 AM Thank you Robert! So glad you stopped by!;)

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 9/4/2019 2:49:00 PM Hello Brenda Chirl, just by reading this poem, I felt like i was on a journey with you. have a nice day my friend. Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 9/5/2019 1:12:00 AM Thank you Darlene I do appreciate your warm comment!;)

Nick Trim Date: 8/28/2019 6:14:00 AM everyone is saying romantic, I say kinky, kinky twinky star you write just like a Wonderbra, pushed above and out so far, you should meet my Milkybar lol good muff... I mean stuff.... stuff your muff.....great poetry Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 9/5/2019 1:16:00 AM Lol ok then muppet!;) Brenda Chiri Date: 9/5/2019 1:14:00 AM WK if I bottle it can I sell it? Haha! What is a poem if one can not be kinky twinky or carnal?;) Nick Trim Date: 9/1/2019 7:27:00 PM errr poetic, its a parody twinkle twinkle little star cus you're a star, and you have too take these opportunities on soup, and i'm you stick not your poetry benda ok lol Brenda Chiri Date: 8/28/2019 8:21:00 PM WK lol Nick is always giving me grief over my poetry! Lol! Such a muppet! Hahaha!;) Brenda Chiri Date: 8/28/2019 11:11:00 AM Lmao! Muppet I swear you always make me laugh with you errrr poetic? Lol comments!;) thx muppet!;)

Paul Callus Date: 8/27/2019 1:24:00 PM Beautiful and romantic, Brenda! A short offering, compared to many of your poems, but definitely brilliant...deserving of a fav ;) hugs // paul Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 8/27/2019 3:05:00 PM Thank you so much Paul I really appreciate your comments and read!;)

James Edward Lee Sr. Date: 8/26/2019 11:18:00 AM So beautiful uplifting sugar sweet verse.. A fond delicate verse... Screams love and togetherness..A treasure A FAV Write on. James Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 8/26/2019 11:23:00 AM James thank you so very much!;)

Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/26/2019 8:16:00 AM You do indeed light up the sky. ;0) Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 8/26/2019 11:23:00 AM Lol thank you Rick! Your comments are so welcomed!;)

Chris Green Date: 8/26/2019 7:45:00 AM This was beautiful and filled with affection and desire. Love the format. Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 8/26/2019 11:22:00 AM Thx so much Chris! Appreciated!;)

Ann Foster Date: 8/26/2019 2:48:00 AM Oh so romantic. this was lovely. Ann Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 8/26/2019 7:08:00 AM Ann thank you!;)

Gershon Wolf Date: 8/25/2019 10:07:00 PM I just love the imagery and the intimacy. Nicely penned, Brenda! Best wishes, Gershon Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 8/26/2019 7:08:00 AM Thank you Gershon! ;)

John Hamilton Date: 8/25/2019 6:49:00 PM Yeah, yeah very nice, loved the concept and execution, very delicate! Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 8/26/2019 7:08:00 AM Thank you so much John!;)