Brenda Chiri Poet Free verse

Moon To My Stars

Everyone wants to be the sun
All I need is that one person 
who wants to be the ambient glow 
to my twinkling starlight so 
in the darkest of nights we can 
shine together stealing the 
night skies back with our brilliance

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Robert Lindley September 13, 2019 at 9:08 AM You hit a very high mark with this one my friend. So much packed into so few verses. God bless.... A fav... a sweet gem too... Brenda Chiri September 13, 2019 at 9:11 AM Thank you Robert! So glad you stopped by!;)

Darlene De Beaulieu September 4, 2019 at 2:49 PM Hello Brenda Chirl, just by reading this poem, I felt like i was on a journey with you. have a nice day my friend. Brenda Chiri September 5, 2019 at 1:12 AM Thank you Darlene I do appreciate your warm comment!;)

Nick Trim August 28, 2019 at 6:14 AM everyone is saying romantic, I say kinky, kinky twinky star you write just like a Wonderbra, pushed above and out so far, you should meet my Milkybar lol good muff... I mean stuff.... stuff your muff.....great poetry Brenda Chiri September 5, 2019 at 1:16 AM Lol ok then muppet!;) Brenda Chiri September 5, 2019 at 1:14 AM WK if I bottle it can I sell it? Haha! What is a poem if one can not be kinky twinky or carnal?;) Nick Trim September 1, 2019 at 7:27 PM errr poetic, its a parody twinkle twinkle little star cus you're a star, and you have too take these opportunities on soup, and i'm you stick not your poetry benda ok lol Brenda Chiri August 28, 2019 at 8:21 PM WK lol Nick is always giving me grief over my poetry! Lol! Such a muppet! Hahaha!;) Brenda Chiri August 28, 2019 at 11:11 AM Lmao! Muppet I swear you always make me laugh with you errrr poetic? Lol comments!;) thx muppet!;)

Paul Callus August 27, 2019 at 1:24 PM Beautiful and romantic, Brenda! A short offering, compared to many of your poems, but definitely brilliant...deserving of a fav ;) hugs // paul Brenda Chiri August 27, 2019 at 3:05 PM Thank you so much Paul I really appreciate your comments and read!;)

James Edward Lee Sr. August 26, 2019 at 11:18 AM So beautiful uplifting sugar sweet verse.. A fond delicate verse... Screams love and togetherness..A treasure A FAV Write on. James Brenda Chiri August 26, 2019 at 11:23 AM James thank you so very much!;)

Richard Lamoureux August 26, 2019 at 8:16 AM You do indeed light up the sky. ;0) Brenda Chiri August 26, 2019 at 11:23 AM Lol thank you Rick! Your comments are so welcomed!;)

Chris Green August 26, 2019 at 7:45 AM This was beautiful and filled with affection and desire. Love the format. Brenda Chiri August 26, 2019 at 11:22 AM Thx so much Chris! Appreciated!;)

Ann Foster August 26, 2019 at 2:48 AM Oh so romantic. this was lovely. Ann Brenda Chiri August 26, 2019 at 7:08 AM Ann thank you!;)

Gershon Wolf August 25, 2019 at 10:07 PM I just love the imagery and the intimacy. Nicely penned, Brenda! Best wishes, Gershon Brenda Chiri August 26, 2019 at 7:08 AM Thank you Gershon! ;)

John Hamilton August 25, 2019 at 6:49 PM Yeah, yeah very nice, loved the concept and execution, very delicate! Brenda Chiri August 26, 2019 at 7:08 AM Thank you so much John!;)