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Moon Spoon

In a starless sky

the moon is a spoon that bashfully beams 

behind white wisps of clouds.

You ask me where the stars have gone.

"Darling," I reply, "They shine in your eyes

more brightly than the silver moon.

nightromancefree verse

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Carolyn Devonshire

January 14, 2020 at 12:35 PM

Lovely, Andrea. Sounds like true love. Congrats on your place in Brian's contest! Hugs, Carolyn

Line Gauthier

March 6, 2018 at 9:39 PM

Congrats on your win, Andrea. Very smooth.

Charlie Smith

February 28, 2018 at 11:40 AM

Very romantic Andrea, congratulations...

Vladislav Raven

February 26, 2018 at 6:33 PM

Hi Andrea, Congratulation on your first place win. A wonderful poem as always Andrea. The moon sings through your words. Such a gentle, beautiful write. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Jan Allison

February 26, 2018 at 3:35 PM

So lovely to read this again Andrea, congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

February 26, 2018 at 2:55 PM

Lovely poem, Andrea. Congratulations on your First Place win! Hugs, Sandra

Tom Cunningham

February 26, 2018 at 10:49 AM

Congratulations on your win Andrea. Tom

Roy Pett

February 26, 2018 at 9:18 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Andrea with your beautifully written poem. :))

Connie Marcum Wong

February 26, 2018 at 6:57 AM

Lovely Andrea! Congratulations on your first placement! : )

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

February 26, 2018 at 6:48 AM

Wow. That, is gorgeous Andrea. Congratulations on your win. Just WOW ;) gotta fave <3

Beautiful Scars

February 26, 2018 at 5:24 AM

wow! I was amazed at so much said in such few words, amazing sweet lady : ) thank you and congrats : )-luloo

Line Gauthier

November 18, 2017 at 7:57 PM

Delightful. Congrats on your win, Andrea.

Gregory Richard Barden

November 18, 2017 at 5:12 AM

Best wishes and congrats on your placement, Andrea ... keep writing, friend! :-)

Kim Rodrigues

November 17, 2017 at 8:20 AM

Quite a romantic moment! Congratulations Andrea!

Kai Michael Neumann

November 17, 2017 at 2:15 AM

I love it. So simple, so good. I need poems like that to get me out of my over complicated writings. Beautiful. Kai

Harshita Chaudhary

November 12, 2017 at 8:51 AM

This is so nice.....

James Inman

September 18, 2017 at 10:04 PM

Sweet Andrea. I read it as a Mother to a child.

Andrea Dietrich

September 19, 2017 at 7:35 PM

that would be one way to see it!

Gregory Richard Barden

September 13, 2017 at 11:09 PM

Oh, my, this is absolute charm and beauty, Andrea ... and we all make those little mistakes, (twice this week I wrote poems specifically for contests, labeled them, and never entered! Ugh, I'm an idiot!). Sad thing is, it would have been just as lovely without the last line - and a first for sure ... it's first on MY list! :-) <3

Andrea Dietrich

September 14, 2017 at 8:36 AM

thanks, Greg. It is line 5 that needs to go out to be sedoka, but I like that line too much.

Connie Marcum Wong

September 12, 2017 at 8:28 PM

Maybe Sedoka just didn't register Andrea, Which is why you have that extra line. I entered my first attempt at writing a Sedoka. You enter so many contests. I am sure without that extra line this would have been a top winner. : )