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Like sugar sprinkling after twilight, twinking stars come out to play. A silver moon dips into them, then slips between two palms that sway as you and I, beneath this bowl of sky, just spoon the night away! Dec. 20, 2016 for Kai Michael Neumann's Moon Spoon Contest

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Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 1/1/2017 11:45:00 AM

Very nice and interesting piece...Congrats on your win in this contest.....

Jean Murray

Date: 12/28/2016 4:09:00 PM

Romantic piece Andrea. Lovely.

Afzal Nusker

Date: 12/28/2016 7:02:00 AM

The last line is marvelous. Congratulations!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/27/2016 7:56:00 PM

It did do great in this contest Andrea. Congratulations my friend! 7 ; )

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/27/2016 6:57:00 PM

Wonderful romantic imagery, Andrea. Congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra

Rob Carmack

Date: 12/27/2016 2:39:00 PM

Congrats with a hug!

Paul Callus

Date: 12/27/2016 12:05:00 PM

...back with congratulations for a deserved win, Andrea! Regards // paul

Eve Roper

Date: 12/27/2016 11:01:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve

Winged Warrior

Date: 12/27/2016 10:24:00 AM

Congrats!!! Andrea...my fav...god bless...^WW^

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 12/27/2016 10:01:00 AM

It reminds me of Growing up in south Florida. There were many beautiful moonlit night just as you described. (But I didn't know about spooning back then.) Congratulations on your placement.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/27/2016 9:33:00 AM

Awww so sweet and romantic - many congrats Andrea:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/27/2016 8:51:00 AM

Congrats, Andrea! Lovely!

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 12/27/2016 8:11:00 AM

This is awesome. 'To spoon the night away'...Congratulations, Kai

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 12/27/2016 7:13:00 AM

Nice one. Good luck in the contest. (I need a little luck, too. I'm trying to remove the rust from my pen, so to speak.)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/24/2016 1:49:00 AM

Don't the palms just beg for romance Andrea? I loved your entry. There is some tough competition but I think yours will do great! blessings, Connie 7 : )