Andrea Dietrich Poet Monorhyme

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Moon Spoon

Like sugar sprinkling after twilight, twinking stars come out to play.

A silver moon dips into them, then slips between two palms that sway

as you and I, beneath this bowl of sky,  just spoon the night away!


Dec. 20, 2016 for Kai Michael Neumann's  Moon Spoon Contest

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Olusegun Arowolo January 1, 2017 at 11:45 AM Very nice and interesting piece...Congrats on your win in this contest.....

Jean Murray December 28, 2016 at 4:09 PM Romantic piece Andrea. Lovely.

Afzal Nusker December 28, 2016 at 7:02 AM The last line is marvelous. Congratulations!

Connie Marcum Wong December 27, 2016 at 7:56 PM It did do great in this contest Andrea. Congratulations my friend! 7 ; )

Sandra Haight December 27, 2016 at 6:57 PM Wonderful romantic imagery, Andrea. Congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra

Rob Carmack December 27, 2016 at 2:39 PM Congrats with a hug!

Paul Callus December 27, 2016 at 12:05 PM ...back with congratulations for a deserved win, Andrea! Regards // paul

Eve Roper December 27, 2016 at 11:01 AM Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve

Winged Warrior December 27, 2016 at 10:24 AM Congrats!!! Andrea...my fav...god bless...^WW^

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen December 27, 2016 at 10:01 AM It reminds me of Growing up in south Florida. There were many beautiful moonlit night just as you described. (But I didn't know about spooning back then.) Congratulations on your placement.

Jan Allison December 27, 2016 at 9:33 AM Awww so sweet and romantic - many congrats Andrea:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues December 27, 2016 at 8:51 AM Congrats, Andrea! Lovely!

Kai Michael Neumann December 27, 2016 at 8:11 AM This is awesome. 'To spoon the night away'...Congratulations, Kai

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen December 27, 2016 at 7:13 AM Nice one. Good luck in the contest. (I need a little luck, too. I'm trying to remove the rust from my pen, so to speak.)

Connie Marcum Wong December 24, 2016 at 1:49 AM Don't the palms just beg for romance Andrea? I loved your entry. There is some tough competition but I think yours will do great! blessings, Connie 7 : )

Janice Canerdy December 22, 2016 at 7:53 PM Andrea, this one made me smile, close my eyes, and say "Ahhh'"! I love it. Janice

Darren White December 22, 2016 at 1:49 PM Wonderful Spoon... I love it, so romantic too, :)

Doug Vinson December 21, 2016 at 2:08 PM Ooh Baby Ima like this poem. : )

Jennifer Walker December 21, 2016 at 9:04 AM Imagery, imagery, imagery, you paint such beautiful pictures in my head with your words.

Supraja Kannan December 21, 2016 at 7:41 AM Too cute... A big 7... Good luck with the contest...

Leileah Kasperyan December 21, 2016 at 4:59 AM Ooooh! Lovely, Andrea! Beautiful use of spoon(s)! Xx

Constance La France December 20, 2016 at 7:19 PM Andrea, beautifully penned for the contest ~

Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon December 20, 2016 at 4:46 PM Great poem! Well penned! Perfect rhymes!

Tim Smith December 20, 2016 at 4:18 PM Very sweet Andrea.

Ilene Bauer December 20, 2016 at 3:40 PM love it, andrea! delightful!

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