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Moon Spoon

Like sugar sprinkling after twilight, twinking stars come out to play.

A silver moon dips into them, then slips between two palms that sway

as you and I, beneath this bowl of sky,  just spoon the night away!


Dec. 20, 2016 for Kai Michael Neumann's  Moon Spoon Contest

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Olusegun Arowolo Date: 1/1/2017 11:45:00 AM Very nice and interesting piece...Congrats on your win in this contest..... Login to Reply

Jean Murray Date: 12/28/2016 4:09:00 PM Romantic piece Andrea. Lovely. Login to Reply

Afzal Nusker Date: 12/28/2016 7:02:00 AM The last line is marvelous. Congratulations! Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 12/27/2016 7:56:00 PM It did do great in this contest Andrea. Congratulations my friend! 7 ; ) Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 12/27/2016 6:57:00 PM Wonderful romantic imagery, Andrea. Congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply

Rob Carmack Date: 12/27/2016 2:39:00 PM Congrats with a hug! Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 12/27/2016 12:05:00 PM ...back with congratulations for a deserved win, Andrea! Regards // paul Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 12/27/2016 11:01:00 AM Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve Login to Reply

Winged Warrior Date: 12/27/2016 10:24:00 AM Congrats!!! Andrea...my fav...god bless...^WW^ Login to Reply

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 12/27/2016 10:01:00 AM It reminds me of Growing up in south Florida. There were many beautiful moonlit night just as you described. (But I didn't know about spooning back then.) Congratulations on your placement. Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 12/27/2016 9:33:00 AM Awww so sweet and romantic - many congrats Andrea:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 12/27/2016 8:51:00 AM Congrats, Andrea! Lovely! Login to Reply

Kai Michael Neumann Date: 12/27/2016 8:11:00 AM This is awesome. 'To spoon the night away'...Congratulations, Kai Login to Reply

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 12/27/2016 7:13:00 AM Nice one. Good luck in the contest. (I need a little luck, too. I'm trying to remove the rust from my pen, so to speak.) Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 12/24/2016 1:49:00 AM Don't the palms just beg for romance Andrea? I loved your entry. There is some tough competition but I think yours will do great! blessings, Connie 7 : ) Login to Reply

Janice Canerdy Date: 12/22/2016 7:53:00 PM Andrea, this one made me smile, close my eyes, and say "Ahhh'"! I love it. Janice Login to Reply

Darren White Date: 12/22/2016 1:49:00 PM Wonderful Spoon... I love it, so romantic too, :) Login to Reply

Doug Vinson Date: 12/21/2016 2:08:00 PM Ooh Baby Ima like this poem. : ) Login to Reply

Jennifer Walker Date: 12/21/2016 9:04:00 AM Imagery, imagery, imagery, you paint such beautiful pictures in my head with your words. Login to Reply

Supraja Kannan Date: 12/21/2016 7:41:00 AM Too cute... A big 7... Good luck with the contest... Login to Reply

Leileah Kasperyan Date: 12/21/2016 4:59:00 AM Ooooh! Lovely, Andrea! Beautiful use of spoon(s)! Xx Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 12/20/2016 7:19:00 PM Andrea, beautifully penned for the contest ~ Login to Reply

Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon Date: 12/20/2016 4:46:00 PM Great poem! Well penned! Perfect rhymes! Login to Reply

Tim Smith Date: 12/20/2016 4:18:00 PM Very sweet Andrea. Login to Reply

Ilene Bauer Date: 12/20/2016 3:40:00 PM love it, andrea! delightful! Login to Reply

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