Moon Spoon

Moon Spoon The crescent moon spoons the starlit sky. Waiting to become nights’ brightest light. Watching lovers greet their waxing love. Copyright 12/19/2016 Written for P.S. Member Contest: Moon Spoon

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Date: 12/28/2016 8:25:00 PM

Brevity at its best, enough to interest but not so much as to bore. Congratulations, Dane Ann on your word picture of the moon'and the placement.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 12/28/2016 9:44:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind words. They are encouraging. Big Smiles, Dane Ann

Joanna Daniel

Date: 12/28/2016 3:40:00 AM

A lovely imagery, Dane Ann:) congratulations on your win:)

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 12/28/2016 4:05:00 AM

Thank you, Jo, for stopping by to read and congratulate me. Smiles and Hugs, Dane Ann

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/27/2016 7:49:00 PM

I love your comparison of growing love to the growing moon. A very lovely poem Dane Ann. Congratulations on your high placement! : ) 7

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 12/28/2016 3:09:00 AM

Thank you, Connie, for taking the time to comment and congratulate me for my greatly appreciated 2nd place. Your remark encourages me to try to write better and better. Smiles, Dane Ann

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/27/2016 7:00:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Dane! Nicely done. Hugs, Sandra

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 12/28/2016 3:06:00 AM

Thank you for stopping by to congratulate me. I appreciate you. Big Smiles, Dane Ann

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/27/2016 5:12:00 PM

Awesome, Dane Ann. Good to see you active again and congrats for the win.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 12/28/2016 3:05:00 AM

Thank you for your congratulations. It feels good to be back, again. I am definitely enjoying writing. The soup has always been warm and nurturing. It is nice in here.

Mark Martin

Date: 12/27/2016 12:29:00 PM

Nicely done. Congratulations Dane Ann! :-)

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 12/27/2016 1:25:00 PM

Thank you for your most appreciated comment. Big Smiles, Dane Ann