Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Poet Free verse

Moon Spoon

Moon Spoon

The crescent moon spoons the starlit sky.
Waiting to become nights’ brightest light.
Watching lovers greet their waxing love.


Copyright 12/19/2016
Written for P.S. Member Contest: Moon Spoon

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Reason A. Poteet December 28, 2016 at 8:25 PM Brevity at its best, enough to interest but not so much as to bore. Congratulations, Dane Ann on your word picture of the moon'and the placement. Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen December 28, 2016 at 9:44 PM Thank you so much for your kind words. They are encouraging. Big Smiles, Dane Ann

Joanna Daniel December 28, 2016 at 3:40 AM A lovely imagery, Dane Ann:) congratulations on your win:) Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen December 28, 2016 at 4:05 AM Thank you, Jo, for stopping by to read and congratulate me. Smiles and Hugs, Dane Ann

Connie Marcum Wong December 27, 2016 at 7:49 PM I love your comparison of growing love to the growing moon. A very lovely poem Dane Ann. Congratulations on your high placement! : ) 7 Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen December 28, 2016 at 3:09 AM Thank you, Connie, for taking the time to comment and congratulate me for my greatly appreciated 2nd place. Your remark encourages me to try to write better and better. Smiles, Dane Ann

Sandra Haight December 27, 2016 at 7:00 PM Congratulations on your win, Dane! Nicely done. Hugs, Sandra Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen December 28, 2016 at 3:06 AM Thank you for stopping by to congratulate me. I appreciate you. Big Smiles, Dane Ann

Andrea Dietrich December 27, 2016 at 5:12 PM Awesome, Dane Ann. Good to see you active again and congrats for the win. Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen December 28, 2016 at 3:05 AM Thank you for your congratulations. It feels good to be back, again. I am definitely enjoying writing. The soup has always been warm and nurturing. It is nice in here.

Mark Martin December 27, 2016 at 12:29 PM Nicely done. Congratulations Dane Ann! :-) Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen December 27, 2016 at 1:25 PM Thank you for your most appreciated comment. Big Smiles, Dane Ann

Paul Callus December 27, 2016 at 11:58 AM Congratulations on your podium finish, Dane Ann!! It's nice to have you back writing...and winning:) Regards // paul Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen December 27, 2016 at 11:59 AM Thank you for stopping by to leave encouraging words. Hugs back. Big Smiles, Dane

Eve Roper December 27, 2016 at 10:58 AM Congratulations on your win , Dane! Hugs Eve Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen December 27, 2016 at 11:59 AM Thank you, Eve, for stopping by to leave your congratulations. It is greatly appreciated.

Winged Warrior December 27, 2016 at 10:16 AM Beautifully done DASJ...Congrats!!! on your placement...god bless...^WW^ Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen December 27, 2016 at 12:00 PM Thank you for stopping by to leave encouraging words. Hugs and Smiles.

Kim Rodrigues December 27, 2016 at 8:49 AM Congrats, Dane! Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen December 27, 2016 at 9:43 AM I am so excited about this 2nd place. Thank you for stopping by to comment.

Kai Michael Neumann December 27, 2016 at 8:08 AM Congratulations on your win. 'The moon watching over waxing love' is such a great image. Many wishes, Kai Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen December 27, 2016 at 9:45 AM Thank you Kai. It feels so great to place after being away so long. I appreciate your kind words.

Doug Vinson December 19, 2016 at 9:47 PM Beautiful, Dane Ann. : ) Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen December 22, 2016 at 5:36 PM Doug, Encouragement like your comment is greatly appreciated. Thank you.