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Moon Spoon

Moon Spoon

The crescent moon spoons the starlit sky.
Waiting to become nights’ brightest light.
Watching lovers greet their waxing love.


Copyright 12/19/2016
Written for P.S. Member Contest: Moon Spoon

Copyright © Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen | Year Posted 2016

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Reason A. Poteet Date: 12/28/2016 8:25:00 PM Brevity at its best, enough to interest but not so much as to bore. Congratulations, Dane Ann on your word picture of the moon'and the placement. Login to Reply Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 12/28/2016 9:44:00 PM Thank you so much for your kind words. They are encouraging. Big Smiles, Dane Ann

Joanna Daniel Date: 12/28/2016 3:40:00 AM A lovely imagery, Dane Ann:) congratulations on your win:) Login to Reply Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 12/28/2016 4:05:00 AM Thank you, Jo, for stopping by to read and congratulate me. Smiles and Hugs, Dane Ann

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 12/27/2016 7:49:00 PM I love your comparison of growing love to the growing moon. A very lovely poem Dane Ann. Congratulations on your high placement! : ) 7 Login to Reply Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 12/28/2016 3:09:00 AM Thank you, Connie, for taking the time to comment and congratulate me for my greatly appreciated 2nd place. Your remark encourages me to try to write better and better. Smiles, Dane Ann

Sandra Haight Date: 12/27/2016 7:00:00 PM Congratulations on your win, Dane! Nicely done. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 12/28/2016 3:06:00 AM Thank you for stopping by to congratulate me. I appreciate you. Big Smiles, Dane Ann

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/27/2016 5:12:00 PM Awesome, Dane Ann. Good to see you active again and congrats for the win. Login to Reply Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 12/28/2016 3:05:00 AM Thank you for your congratulations. It feels good to be back, again. I am definitely enjoying writing. The soup has always been warm and nurturing. It is nice in here.

Mark Martin Date: 12/27/2016 12:29:00 PM Nicely done. Congratulations Dane Ann! :-) Login to Reply Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 12/27/2016 1:25:00 PM Thank you for your most appreciated comment. Big Smiles, Dane Ann

Paul Callus Date: 12/27/2016 11:58:00 AM Congratulations on your podium finish, Dane Ann!! It's nice to have you back writing...and winning:) Regards // paul Login to Reply Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 12/27/2016 11:59:00 AM Thank you for stopping by to leave encouraging words. Hugs back. Big Smiles, Dane

Eve Roper Date: 12/27/2016 10:58:00 AM Congratulations on your win , Dane! Hugs Eve Login to Reply Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 12/27/2016 11:59:00 AM Thank you, Eve, for stopping by to leave your congratulations. It is greatly appreciated.

Winged Warrior Date: 12/27/2016 10:16:00 AM Beautifully done DASJ...Congrats!!! on your placement...god bless...^WW^ Login to Reply Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 12/27/2016 12:00:00 PM Thank you for stopping by to leave encouraging words. Hugs and Smiles.

Kim Rodrigues Date: 12/27/2016 8:49:00 AM Congrats, Dane! Login to Reply Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 12/27/2016 9:43:00 AM I am so excited about this 2nd place. Thank you for stopping by to comment.

Kai Michael Neumann Date: 12/27/2016 8:08:00 AM Congratulations on your win. 'The moon watching over waxing love' is such a great image. Many wishes, Kai Login to Reply Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 12/27/2016 9:45:00 AM Thank you Kai. It feels so great to place after being away so long. I appreciate your kind words.

Doug Vinson Date: 12/19/2016 9:47:00 PM Beautiful, Dane Ann. : ) Login to Reply Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 12/22/2016 5:36:00 PM Doug, Encouragement like your comment is greatly appreciated. Thank you.