Moon Spoon

I'd like to speak romantically of spooning and mooning but, alas,
My childhood inspired a thought much more vivid and, well, crass.
As a rule-breaker I oft had a wooden spoon applied forcefully to my bare white moon (ass!)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Smith Avatar
December 29, 2016 at 10:08 AM
Ouch, no that feeling, congratulations Cindi...
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 27, 2016 at 7:53 PM
Lol...wasn't expecting this comical entry Cindi. Congratulations on great your win! ; ) 7
Rockwell Avatar
December 27, 2016 at 8:11 PM
Thanks!
Haight Avatar
December 27, 2016 at 6:58 PM
Very funny and cute, Cindi! Congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra
Rockwell Avatar
December 27, 2016 at 8:12 PM
Thanks!
Dietrich Avatar
December 27, 2016 at 5:19 PM
I recall using the word ass in one of my contest entries this year and the judge gave me an N/A for not acceptable. Made me so mad. Good grief!!
Rockwell Avatar
December 27, 2016 at 5:32 PM
Not always sure why I get N/A. I think I'd rather not know!
Dietrich Avatar
December 27, 2016 at 5:18 PM
haha. A great one for humor. Big congrats
Vinson Avatar
December 27, 2016 at 1:43 PM
Ha! Cheers, Cyndi - and here's to bustin' a rule now and then. :)
Callus Avatar
December 27, 2016 at 12:04 PM
Ouch! That must have hurt, Cindi...definitely it wasn't romantic:( Congratulations on this fine win. Regards // paul
Roper Avatar
December 27, 2016 at 11:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
Warrior Avatar
December 27, 2016 at 10:31 AM
Congrats!!! Cindi...LOL...god bless...^WW^
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
December 27, 2016 at 9:55 AM
Yes, I am laughing out loud, a very LONG laugh. I can relate to these words. lol Congratulations on your 2nd placement.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 27, 2016 at 8:50 AM
LOL...funny! Congrats, Cindi!
Neumann Avatar
December 27, 2016 at 8:10 AM
I like out of the box thinking. Hope your bum has recovered. Congratulations, Kai
Flats Avatar
December 19, 2016 at 9:01 AM
Oye, lass! :-). thanks for the chuckles ~ j
Hoffman Avatar
December 19, 2016 at 6:31 AM
Maybe crass but definitely clever, lol! G/L in the contest Cindi!:)
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