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Moon Spoon

Moon Spoon Moon doggin' on a moon spoon...skimmin' waves, Catchin' curls on almond waves...arcin' spray Beneath the Surfers' Moon out...on J-Bay deborah burch© 12.16.16 _____________________________________ Form: Tercet (listed as verse since not in list) FYI:Readers: Moon Spoon* is a surfboard in this poem. :)

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/24/2016 1:05:00 AM

I love this entry Deb. My husband was a surfer for years until he almost died at Sandy Beach...then he gave it up. The waves broke his surf board in half. I hope this one does really well in the contest! 7 : )

Deborah Burch
Date: 12/24/2016 4:11:00 AM

Connie you are so wonderfully kind and encouraging!!! Thank you!! That's a lot of pounding to break a board...especially with rapid sets and killer breakers!! I hear the north shore is awesome and just as powerful!! I'm glad your husband survived it! Mahalo!! Deb

Darren White

Date: 12/21/2016 10:36:00 PM

Ooohh, I wrote a Spoon too. I love yours :) It says a lot of things I've never heard of, but I think I know what it's about. Good luck in the contest!

Deborah Burch
Date: 12/22/2016 2:54:00 AM

Lol!! Thanks Darren!! Yes it's surfing. Some terms are old school and not used by the younger generation. Lol. But night surfing is still a purveyor of better sets. Big Hugggs. I'm off to read your Spoon!!;)

Tamal Kundu

Date: 12/20/2016 11:57:00 PM

'Almond waves', love it! Good luck in the contest, Deborah

Deborah Burch
Date: 12/21/2016 12:19:00 AM

Thank you Tamal!! :) Hugggs!! Deb

Paul Callus

Date: 12/20/2016 11:33:00 AM

I like this one, Deborah...quite creative, to say the least! gl in the contest. ~ Warm regards // paul

Deborah Burch
Date: 12/20/2016 10:47:00 PM

Thank you , Paul!! I tried to think outside the proverbial box...had thought of several other options but settled for this one. Big Hugggs. Deb