Moon Over Miami

The lights of Little Havana glowed
And in the cantinas tequila flowed
Wisps of starlight filled the sky
As the moon over Miami drew nigh
         
The senorita dipped and swayed
All over the streets the music played
In a joyous frenzy her lover danced
And the lady fell deeply entranced

They kissed and moved to a Latin beat
As the notes rose in the Miami heat
Then the distant moon grew big and bright
Soon covering that Miami night

They fell in love as they twirled and turned
And all the while their passion burned
The moon over Miami shivered
As their lovers' quest was soon delivered






* for Deborah Guzzi's contest "Harvest Moon"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Locksley Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 5:20 PM
Real passionate poem for the Harvest Moon contest, Deb. I enjoyed it very much. Good luck! Take care, Diane
K. Avatar
September 19, 2010 at 11:06 AM
This definitely is a wonderful take on Deborah's contest enjoyed how you incorporated dance to this-- very nice touch to adding atmosphere for that moon in Miami :) wish you the best in the contest :)
Dietrich Avatar
September 17, 2010 at 7:57 PM
I like how you put the Latin dancing into the Moon over Miami. Very cool writing. Luv, Andrea
Falotico Avatar
September 17, 2010 at 3:18 PM
Always a pure pleasure to read your wondefuly written work... a true Poet...love Michael
Kendrick Avatar
September 17, 2010 at 2:10 PM
Enjoyed reading of your work..It grabbed my attention, drew me in, and held me..I could just see people in the street dancing to so very lively music..Good luck in the contest...Sara
Mehta Avatar
September 17, 2010 at 1:12 PM
Very creative rhyming write, Deb. Good luck.
Johnson Avatar
September 17, 2010 at 12:37 PM
Great entry for the contest. I truly think it will be a high winner. Love, Joyce
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