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Moon on a Spoon

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Valsa George

Date: 3/21/2025 9:43:00 PM

When one is deeply in love , one is ready to do anything for the loved one. He/she will even go to the extent of plucking the moon from the sky and carrying it in a spoon. A great romantic poem in neat rhyming couplets. All the Best dear Miranda.

Karen Jones

Date: 3/21/2025 8:09:00 PM

A sweet romantic poem. :0)

Miranda Hawley
Date: 3/21/2025 8:38:00 PM

Thanks!

John Read

Date: 3/14/2025 12:02:00 PM

Hi Miranda, I hope your moon on a spoon is a winner for you.

Miranda Hawley
Date: 3/21/2025 8:38:00 PM

Thanks!

CayCay Jennings

Date: 3/13/2025 7:16:00 AM

Andrea (below) stole my word: Whimsical is the feeling your lighthearted poem gave me. Truly a poem to 'frolic' through. I read your bio and as a Mother of a special needs son (now 39, still living with me), I want to thank you for working with them. My son's IQ is around 70, but I know many such as you wrote of from school and Special Olympics. I don't recall ever 'meeting' you. I left in 4-22, came back 1-25. You want to revise last line, first para of your bio (I'm helpful). HUGS...CayCay

Miranda Hawley
Date: 3/13/2025 8:25:00 PM

Glad you fond this whimsical. As for my bio, my simply riding on the bus with the special needs students is something I've done for almost 9 years now. This year I get moved from bus to bus, because if someone doesn't come into work they ask me to fill in. The Special Olympics would be cool to see.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/10/2025 2:49:00 PM

Whimsical romance, Miranda. I think this is cute.

Miranda Hawley
Date: 3/13/2025 8:26:00 PM

Thanks!

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/10/2025 5:02:00 AM

Miranda, Pure magic. I loved the way you create playfulness with deep emotions. Catching the moon on a spoon is such a beautiful image! I love the gentle love and rhythm in every line. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Miranda Hawley
Date: 3/13/2025 8:26:00 PM

Thanks!

wayne tolbert

Date: 3/7/2025 3:20:00 AM

Love this! Thanks for the light-hearted look at life when I (we) certainly need it! Just picked up a spoon to stir my coffee and I thought of a time to "dance to the melody of poetic bars" Thanks so much.

Miranda Hawley
Date: 3/13/2025 8:26:00 PM

Thanks!