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moon of popping trees

ultra-white heaven
trees pop beneath winter weight ~ 
		quiet falls heavy
 
(December Full Moon – Oglala)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Peck Avatar
December 22, 2025 at 12:23 PM
Beautiful!
Fowler Avatar
January 9, 2026 at 10:05 AM
Thanks dear Ann. :)
Maverick Avatar
December 13, 2025 at 11:49 PM
And i thought it was going to be a tooth Paste themed write.? Ya know first ' impressions n all' mind you it has real Bite.?
Fowler Avatar
January 9, 2026 at 10:05 AM
Haha Joe. Always a pleasure to see you on my page. :)
Buhagiar Avatar
December 10, 2025 at 5:20 AM
I appreciate the depth of your emotions. You did well.
Fowler Avatar
January 9, 2026 at 10:04 AM
Hi dear Victor So glad you visited and commented. I hope your holidays were pleasurable. :)
Hind Avatar
December 6, 2025 at 3:04 PM
This is deep, truly truly beautiful.
Fowler Avatar
January 9, 2026 at 10:04 AM
Thanks Paige. I appreciate you! :)
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 3, 2025 at 6:53 AM
just love this--a gem of a Haiku
Fowler Avatar
January 9, 2026 at 10:03 AM
I am glad it resonated Sara. Many thanks! :)
Hawley Avatar
December 2, 2025 at 7:51 PM
I agree with the message in the last line, and it pairs especially well with your picture. Good job.
Fowler Avatar
January 9, 2026 at 10:03 AM
Thank you Miranda. :)
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