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Moon Melody

Moon Melody


Full moon
Whispers light
Beneath branches-
Dancing shadows singing
My song




08/11/10
6:08pm

-For Constance's contest
-Inspired by her poem "The Melody Of The Dawn"

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Matthew Anish

August 23, 2010 at 4:49 PM

Fine succinct poem! I believe you commented on my poem "Dawn on a Small Planet" but I wiped out your comment. Keep up the good work and let me know again what you think of that poem. And keep it up! Yours Matthew Anish

Carolyn Devonshire

August 15, 2010 at 11:51 AM

Congratulations on your win, Jimbo! Have a nice vacation. Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 15, 2010 at 8:57 AM

My congratulations James to you on your win in Constance ~ A Rambling Poet's contest "Scavenger Hunt". Love, Carol

John Freeman

August 15, 2010 at 8:48 AM

Congratulations James on your win. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

August 15, 2010 at 7:38 AM

Congrats Jimbo on your winning poem in the Scavenger Hunt contest with this wonderful write and win to enjoy this happy Sunday... have a great time away too.. I have arrived in Italy..yeah.... can hear those wedding bells..luv.

Dr.Ram Mehta

August 14, 2010 at 9:35 PM

Congrats on the win, James

Juan Paolo Galua

August 13, 2010 at 4:31 AM

wow...the imagery is mind ravishing...thank you...i always love the moon scenes and this is just as lovely james...^_^ v

Poet Destroyer A

August 12, 2010 at 6:13 PM

the image put in my head is soothing, enjoyed this one...P.D.

Joyce Johnson

August 12, 2010 at 5:20 PM

Nice entry James. Thank your for your comments on my latest. Love, Joyce

Diiamond Rich

August 12, 2010 at 11:19 AM

Enjoyed this piece of poetry this afternoon and will definantly have to read more from you. Have a great day and these gems coming.

Daver Austin

August 12, 2010 at 10:21 AM

Yes, those mysterious "dancing shadows" Au Claire de la Lune. Dave

Francine Roberts

August 12, 2010 at 7:41 AM

gorgeous, good luck in the contest

Jessica Arteaga

August 11, 2010 at 8:16 PM

lovely cinqku, every word is full c:

Dr.Ram Mehta

August 11, 2010 at 7:20 PM

Wish you good luck, a perfect Cinqku, James. Of course I have not read that of Constance

Sara Kendrick

August 11, 2010 at 5:51 PM

Beautifully expressed of the early morn..Good luck in the contest with this sure winner..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my blog...I am not hurting quite as bad right now as I was...The cortizone dose pack has started to take effect..Of course, the pain is not gone but not as severe....I have not done very much work in about five days either..I have just done just enough to get by and not using the joint is helping...Thanks again..Sara