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Moon Melody

Moon Melody Full moon Whispers light Beneath branches- Dancing shadows singing My song 08/11/10 6:08pm -For Constance's contest -Inspired by her poem "The Melody Of The Dawn"

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Matthew Anish

Date: 8/23/2010 4:49:00 PM

Fine succinct poem! I believe you commented on my poem "Dawn on a Small Planet" but I wiped out your comment. Keep up the good work and let me know again what you think of that poem. And keep it up! Yours Matthew Anish

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/15/2010 11:51:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Jimbo! Have a nice vacation. Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/15/2010 8:57:00 AM

My congratulations James to you on your win in Constance ~ A Rambling Poet's contest "Scavenger Hunt". Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 8/15/2010 8:48:00 AM

Congratulations James on your win. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/15/2010 7:38:00 AM

Congrats Jimbo on your winning poem in the Scavenger Hunt contest with this wonderful write and win to enjoy this happy Sunday... have a great time away too.. I have arrived in Italy..yeah.... can hear those wedding bells..luv.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/14/2010 9:35:00 PM

Congrats on the win, James

Juan Paolo Galua

Date: 8/13/2010 4:31:00 AM

wow...the imagery is mind ravishing...thank you...i always love the moon scenes and this is just as lovely james...^_^ v

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/12/2010 6:13:00 PM

the image put in my head is soothing, enjoyed this one...P.D.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/12/2010 5:20:00 PM

Nice entry James. Thank your for your comments on my latest. Love, Joyce

Diiamond Rich

Date: 8/12/2010 11:19:00 AM

Enjoyed this piece of poetry this afternoon and will definantly have to read more from you. Have a great day and these gems coming.

Daver Austin

Date: 8/12/2010 10:21:00 AM

Yes, those mysterious "dancing shadows" Au Claire de la Lune. Dave

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/12/2010 7:41:00 AM

gorgeous, good luck in the contest

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 8/11/2010 8:16:00 PM

lovely cinqku, every word is full c:

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/11/2010 7:20:00 PM

Wish you good luck, a perfect Cinqku, James. Of course I have not read that of Constance

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/11/2010 5:51:00 PM

Beautifully expressed of the early morn..Good luck in the contest with this sure winner..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my blog...I am not hurting quite as bad right now as I was...The cortizone dose pack has started to take effect..Of course, the pain is not gone but not as severe....I have not done very much work in about five days either..I have just done just enough to get by and not using the joint is helping...Thanks again..Sara

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/11/2010 4:54:00 PM

lovely, good luck in the contest

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/11/2010 4:41:00 PM

A wonderful, image-packed and melodic interpretation of Constance's poem, Jimbo. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 8/11/2010 4:16:00 PM

wonderful write my friend... enjoyed your work today....