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Moon Is My Muse

La Luna’s sneaking through the sky tonight; I bet she thinks her creamy sheen is hid by clouds of grey, but now and then her light becomes exposed. Just who’s she trying to kid? She slowly slides behind nocturnal haze; I see a slice of her as she creeps by. Perhaps this is another lunar phase, one in which she’s showing us she’s sly. That Luna is mysterious we know, but also she’s a muse for those who woo. So why does she withhold a steady glow, and what’s an ardent suitor going to do? He tells his love, “The moon shines full tonight.” They gaze up at her face; she drifts from sight! 3/1/13 for Russell Sivey's Moon is my Muse Poetry Contest

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Date: 2/18/2014 10:09:00 PM
Another inspirational Luna write!
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Date: 3/23/2013 7:46:00 PM
Congrad's on your big win. Light & Love
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Date: 3/21/2013 12:26:00 PM
Congrats on your great win..Enjoyed looking at it again..Sara
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Date: 3/20/2013 5:12:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea on a great win...Donna
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Date: 3/18/2013 5:39:00 PM
It's really not her fault. She's there. It's those intrusive clouds. Congratulations Andrea. Nice win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/18/2013 5:03:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations with your musing moon poem :-) hope your having a sweet day... always~ LINDA
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Date: 3/18/2013 4:05:00 PM
congrats on a fine win Andrea
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Date: 3/18/2013 10:02:00 AM
Proving once again that sometimes love needs more than just moonlight! Once again a perfect write. Congratulations on your top placing in Russell's contest. RAY
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Date: 3/18/2013 9:52:00 AM
Wonderful, Andrea!...you are so good at sonnets...Congrats!
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Date: 3/18/2013 9:46:00 AM
Andrea I love that the La Luna sneaks through the sky staying sly. Nicely done. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 3/15/2013 3:08:00 PM
Nicely written on this poem. love phyl
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Date: 3/6/2013 7:40:00 PM
I enjoyed this lovely sonnet Andrea...winning wishes
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Date: 3/6/2013 9:37:00 AM
awesome sonnet, my friend - a sure winner
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Date: 3/4/2013 6:29:00 PM
Miss Tear Ree Us......loved it...
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Date: 3/4/2013 8:49:00 AM
sweet Andrea :) this is so superb!!! what a wonderful Sonnet :) Congratulation for the contest dearest one <3 all the best <3 luv and hugs :) Sk
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Date: 3/3/2013 6:17:00 PM
The beauty of the moon always moves me as did this write, excellent as always.
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Date: 3/3/2013 3:45:00 PM
Oh i just love this Andrea, a little different, yet a wonderful sonnet..good luck in contest...
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Date: 3/3/2013 12:43:00 PM
Reads like top of the list to me..Enjoyed reading about the moon this cold windy but sunny afternoon..We had a few snow flakes this morn..Sara
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Date: 3/3/2013 9:56:00 AM
That fickle old Moon! Nothing fickle about your output though. YOu are consistently great. Love, daver
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Date: 3/3/2013 8:13:00 AM
Ah another verse using now Italian ;) Light & love
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/3/2013 2:58:00 PM
I meant gottcha. haha
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/3/2013 2:57:00 PM
ok, gottach!!
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 3/3/2013 12:12:00 PM
I was just pointing out I also used a foriegn word for the moon Belle Lune which is french..but you have used the what I think is more roamntic Italian I think Bella Luna
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/3/2013 9:01:00 AM
I don't even know what you are talking about, Debs.
Date: 3/3/2013 6:33:00 AM
Andrea, Thank-you for reviewing Sarah's Song. The idea that we can extract fossil carbon with impunity when it took nature a billion years to sequester it is a funny one. I can not say enough what a wonderful poet you are. We do live in an incredible universe that is so much fun.
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Date: 3/3/2013 4:36:00 AM
Andrea a moonlit romance, I like...David
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Date: 3/3/2013 1:27:00 AM
I could feel the moonbeams!
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Date: 3/2/2013 2:07:00 PM
A very full write from you on the moon Andrea..well no you're not (on) the moon I know that.." L O L but you are certainly onto her wiles" Whilst i am on that subject...wiles I mean..well you know what i mean!! in the meanwhiles I wish you a winning success, in this moomstruck contest..!!
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Date: 3/2/2013 12:26:00 PM
Lovely write dear Andrea. Hugs
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