Moon Is My Muse

La Luna’s sneaking through the sky tonight; I bet she thinks her creamy sheen is hid by clouds of grey, but now and then her light becomes exposed. Just who’s she trying to kid? She slowly slides behind nocturnal haze; I see a slice of her as she creeps by. Perhaps this is another lunar phase, one in which she’s showing us she’s sly. That Luna is mysterious we know, but also she’s a muse for those who woo. So why does she withhold a steady glow, and what’s an ardent suitor going to do? He tells his love, “The moon shines full tonight.” They gaze up at her face; she drifts from sight! 3/1/13 for Russell Sivey's Moon is my Muse Poetry Contest
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Carroll Avatar
February 18, 2014 at 10:09 PM
Another inspirational Luna write!
Guzzi Avatar
March 23, 2013 at 7:46 PM
Congrad's on your big win. Light & Love
Kendrick Avatar
March 21, 2013 at 12:26 PM
Congrats on your great win..Enjoyed looking at it again..Sara
Jones Avatar
March 20, 2013 at 5:12 PM
Congratulations Andrea on a great win...Donna
Johnson Avatar
March 18, 2013 at 5:39 PM
It's really not her fault. She's there. It's those intrusive clouds. Congratulations Andrea. Nice win. Love, Joyce
A   Avatar
March 18, 2013 at 5:03 PM
Andrea, congratulations with your musing moon poem :-) hope your having a sweet day... always~ LINDA
May Avatar
March 18, 2013 at 4:05 PM
congrats on a fine win Andrea
Dillard Avatar
March 18, 2013 at 10:02 AM
Proving once again that sometimes love needs more than just moonlight! Once again a perfect write. Congratulations on your top placing in Russell's contest. RAY
Hunter Avatar
March 18, 2013 at 9:52 AM
Wonderful, Andrea!...you are so good at sonnets...Congrats!
Gildersleeve Avatar
March 18, 2013 at 9:46 AM
Andrea I love that the La Luna sneaks through the sky staying sly. Nicely done. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Warm Smiles, Connie
Babcock Avatar
March 15, 2013 at 3:08 PM
Nicely written on this poem. love phyl
May Avatar
March 6, 2013 at 7:40 PM
I enjoyed this lovely sonnet Andrea...winning wishes
Horne Avatar
March 6, 2013 at 9:37 AM
awesome sonnet, my friend - a sure winner
Konos Avatar
March 4, 2013 at 6:29 PM
Miss Tear Ree Us......loved it...
Komala Avatar
March 4, 2013 at 8:49 AM
sweet Andrea :) this is so superb!!! what a wonderful Sonnet :) Congratulation for the contest dearest one <3 all the best <3 luv and hugs :) Sk
Nutter Avatar
March 3, 2013 at 6:17 PM
The beauty of the moon always moves me as did this write, excellent as always.
Horsman Avatar
March 3, 2013 at 3:45 PM
Oh i just love this Andrea, a little different, yet a wonderful sonnet..good luck in contest...
Kendrick Avatar
March 3, 2013 at 12:43 PM
Reads like top of the list to me..Enjoyed reading about the moon this cold windy but sunny afternoon..We had a few snow flakes this morn..Sara
Austin Avatar
March 3, 2013 at 9:56 AM
That fickle old Moon! Nothing fickle about your output though. YOu are consistently great. Love, daver
Guzzi Avatar
March 3, 2013 at 8:13 AM
Ah another verse using now Italian ;) Light & love
Dietrich Avatar
March 3, 2013 at 2:58 PM
I meant gottcha. haha
Dietrich Avatar
March 3, 2013 at 2:57 PM
ok, gottach!!
Guzzi Avatar
March 3, 2013 at 12:12 PM
I was just pointing out I also used a foriegn word for the moon Belle Lune which is french..but you have used the what I think is more roamntic Italian I think Bella Luna
Dietrich Avatar
March 3, 2013 at 9:01 AM
I don't even know what you are talking about, Debs.
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March 3, 2013 at 6:33 AM
Andrea, Thank-you for reviewing Sarah's Song. The idea that we can extract fossil carbon with impunity when it took nature a billion years to sequester it is a funny one. I can not say enough what a wonderful poet you are. We do live in an incredible universe that is so much fun.
Williams Avatar
March 3, 2013 at 4:36 AM
Andrea a moonlit romance, I like...David
Martin Avatar
March 3, 2013 at 1:27 AM
I could feel the moonbeams!
Maverick Avatar
March 2, 2013 at 2:07 PM
A very full write from you on the moon Andrea..well no you're not (on) the moon I know that.." L O L but you are certainly onto her wiles" Whilst i am on that subject...wiles I mean..well you know what i mean!! in the meanwhiles I wish you a winning success, in this moomstruck contest..!!
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March 2, 2013 at 12:26 PM
Lovely write dear Andrea. Hugs
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