Moon Glade

o'er the horizon

yesterday's imperfections

look,tomorrow waits



Inspired by Raul's photo
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Jordan Avatar
December 23, 2009 at 7:05 PM
Excellent Haiku Brian - Congratulations on your success in Raul’s contest, wonderful job with this poetic challenge – Brian I want to thank you for everything you do on the site - Please don't think because I've been so scarce I don't care - I have great respect for you not only as a poet but as a friend and a man of faith - God Bless, mj
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December 19, 2009 at 2:36 AM
Congratulations Brian, on your success in Raul’s Reflections contest with this heartfelt poem. Lovingly, Dane Ann
Haick Avatar
December 7, 2009 at 5:14 AM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's "Reflections" Contest, Brian! Peace and love, audrey
Goff Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 3:46 PM
well done Brian! congrats! jimbo
George   Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 9:08 AM
Very spiritual and uplifting take on Raul's Hailu photo. contest. Congratulation on your win, Brian. Lainie
K. Avatar
December 2, 2009 at 8:03 PM
such an inspiring haiku--it really brings hope to the reader :) Congrats on your win in the contest & enjoy your day, Brian :)
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December 2, 2009 at 4:07 PM
Congratulations, on your win, Brian and thanks for your comments.
Thomas Avatar
December 2, 2009 at 1:47 PM
Wonderful poetry as always, Brian. Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest, and thank you so much for your kind comments! ~Juliane
Haick Avatar
December 2, 2009 at 1:44 PM
Dear Brian, Congratulations on your win in Raul's "Reflections" Contest! Thanks for your kind comments on my poem. Peace and love, Audrey
Gorelick Avatar
December 2, 2009 at 9:04 AM
You always have a unique view..contrats on you win in the contest.. Love, BG
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December 2, 2009 at 8:07 AM
nicley penned, congrats on the win in the contest!!
Richards Avatar
December 2, 2009 at 7:42 AM
A beautiful and thoughtful look at this photograph. I love this deep personalization of this haiku! Congratulations on your win, Brian! Lovely work!, Carrie
Sweetheart Avatar
December 2, 2009 at 4:50 AM
Congrats Brian on your winning poem in Raul;s contest.. well deserved win.. blessings ... luv... Linda-Marie ..
Brown Avatar
December 2, 2009 at 3:18 AM
Congratulations on your win Brian. Love, Carol
Moreno Avatar
December 2, 2009 at 2:40 AM
Brian, congratulations on your success in my contest...Raul
Owens Avatar
November 28, 2009 at 5:58 PM
Love this Haiku Brian...Good luck in the contest...Marty
Goff Avatar
November 28, 2009 at 5:24 AM
stretches my mind beyond the poem! cool effect! Brian! jimbo
Chamma Avatar
November 27, 2009 at 2:50 PM
I really like this Brian...thanks =) Always, Farah
George   Avatar
November 26, 2009 at 11:36 PM
AWESOME HAIKU!, Brian. Best wishes in Raul's contest. Lainie
Kendrick Avatar
November 26, 2009 at 6:43 AM
Interesting choice of words for this amazing Haiku. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
November 26, 2009 at 5:08 AM
Thankxxx Brian for your kind words on my poetry and for choosing me a second place winner in your My Dear contest.. I truly feel honored and blessed that u enjoy my poetry and my spirit as I write my words.. Moon Glade is so beautiful and already a winner and favorite for me today ... good luck in Raul's contest .. I am in Pittsburgh for a few days visiting my brother and his significant other and he has fired up his computer just so I can still "talk" on Soup.. happy T. Day to u and yours...
Brown Avatar
November 25, 2009 at 5:03 AM
Such fasinating writing I am reading today. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and heart with us today Brian. Wishing you the best in Raul's contest. I wish you a weekend filled with love and inspiration. May your writings inspire others to write from their hearts as well. Love, Carol
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