Moon For Dinner

The night falls 
and me and a friend are having a walk
He looks up the sky and says stare up high
the moon looks ugly
I look at it and think, then say:
Someone ate the moon
It seems so tasty but it makes you so wasty
It look so cool but it makes you a fool
As we dazzled up high we laughed with a cry
A car comes by and we say good-bye
But thank you God cause we didn't die
I farted, he peed
He cried, I screamed!!
The man comes out, he wants to knock us out
While he was swaying he was saying:
What's this smell? The floor is so wet
Why do you cry? As if your momma died
We stand up saying as if we were playing:
Shut up punk! Your momma's so fat!
The cops come down asking what was down
I ate the moon, I say like a fool
He looked up strait and fell with a praise
I felt like a God but I'm just a mod
I go to the guy tell him he will die
He punched me high making me fly
My friend was a freak, he gave a big shriek
Everyone left and I was left
My friend gazed as he hold me strait
And told me that I have to write that
I said okay and you're so gay.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Konos Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 7:42 AM
Nice Win Sami.....Congratulations, Judy
Taylor Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 11:37 AM
Congrats on a well deserved win, Sami. Nice going. Ralph
Brown Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 10:42 AM
A big congratulations on your win Sami. I also believe it is one of your best poems. Love, Carol
K. Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 9:56 AM
Coming back here to congratulate you Sami :) Enjoyed this poem-- way to go on your win :)
Sweetheart Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 6:50 AM
Congrats Sami on your awesome win in Joyce's contest with this unique write .. enjoy your top ten sweet success with luv..
Helbaoui Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 5:05 AM
Oh wow! I didn't think that this poem would even be in the top 10... :S :D Happy I am to be :P
Dietrich Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 11:42 PM
hmmm, it sounds to me like someone was HIGH in this story. Congratulations. A very interesting poem and loved its title.
K. Avatar
February 21, 2011 at 11:31 AM
Hi Sami :) Very interesting story you have here, your title caught my eye and that sure is a unique thing to say, eating the moon-- glad that everything was fine in the end and that you got inspired to write this - enjoyed reading this :D
Helbaoui Avatar
February 21, 2011 at 4:26 AM
Thank you! I wrote this to my friend after a consequence of events... :P I am really glad you liked it.. Thank you
Mehta Avatar
February 20, 2011 at 4:10 PM
What a poetic expressions on Moon for dinner, Sami
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