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Moon Dusted

Entranced as I was
By man in the moon,
I dreamed my young dreams,
Rehearsed my love tunes.
Romance reigned supreme.

Romantic high
In young girl's dream
As high as sky 
Or bright moonbeam.

Seductive
Dust in eyes
Cloaks the lies.

Concealed
Revealed

Fraud

Broad

Promise 
Of moon

Though believed
Unachieved
Was deceived 

Even the moon
Changes his tune,
Breaking a heart,
Seduced from start.

Girls, dream if you must,
But not with moon dust
Covering your eyes.
It is no surprise
Man in the moon lies.




won a third

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/4/2012 1:36:00 PM
I like where you went with this poem. Congratulations on your win. Mike
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Date: 4/3/2012 11:00:00 PM
Congrats, Joyce! I knew this was going to place high. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 4/3/2012 5:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Catie's contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/2/2012 8:45:00 PM
Wow, Joyce this is a different take on the man in the moon-- I really enjoyed how you did yours with a twist-- being entranced by the moon at first then at the other half revealing how it could lie... congrats on your win! :D
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Date: 4/2/2012 4:27:00 PM
congrats Joycde on a wonderful writ4 and win for the DH contst with these amazing set of lines.. not easy to do but u cleverly constructed a winning wonder luv..
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Date: 3/22/2012 5:52:00 PM
A great write, Joyce! It took me to an unexpected place between a fairy tale and reality. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 3/22/2012 11:35:00 AM
very cool poem i like it very much take care always p.d.
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