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Moon Captured By Her Spells

Blue skies and rainbows Science fiction and fables Poetess and poet are making love She’s writes the verses to undress me Great lines that flower in her hair Her lips of ink are red and rosy Each stanza goes straight to my head I want to read and read her Over and over Every day, any time From cover to cover She writes of loneliness and sorrow Of broken hearts that never mend She is the dream I need each morning Moon captured by her spells I want to read and read her Over and over Every day, any time From cover to cover Blue skies and rainbows Science fictions and fables Poetess and poet are making love

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Nancy Kaufman

Date: 8/27/2020 1:53:00 PM

such a sweet read..loved it..

Carole Duet

Date: 6/19/2020 7:34:00 PM

What a romantic scenario...magnetic!

Arturo Michael
Date: 6/20/2020 9:45:00 AM

Thanks Carole...All the best my friend...

Funom Makama

Date: 6/8/2020 8:50:00 PM

Wow! Oh wow! I just don't know what to say.. This is beautiful, sensual, surreal and so real. Love expressed on the mountains, hidden in the snow and melted by the rising sun. Love fully enjoyed for the fur of the Bear to lie and the trees to keep their leaves in winter. Great write my friend.

Arturo Michael
Date: 6/9/2020 2:48:00 AM

Thank you Funom...Good to see you...All the best

John Hamilton

Date: 6/3/2020 9:16:00 PM

Belated congrats Arturo, it is a lovely write with a lyrical quality which I truly enjoy, Nice POTD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/2/2020 6:31:00 PM

just seeing your reply down here to me. Let me know when you accomplish those things with this poem!

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/2/2020 8:38:00 AM

Most definitely a top class piece. So very good that I read it three times! Closing stanza is perfect.. A fav.. God bless....

Arturo Michael
Date: 6/2/2020 11:05:00 AM

You can tell, I am my own critic...trying my best to make sense out of non sense...Thank you Robert...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/29/2020 5:31:00 PM

oh very lovely and lyrical. I imagine this one as a song.

Arturo Michael
Date: 5/29/2020 6:33:00 PM

Thanks Andrea...I told Paul I will trying to develop a storytelling type voicing... and read the poems with background music and effects... I always try something new...it keeps me inspired...Maybe someone else can sing it

Joanna Daniel

Date: 5/29/2020 9:05:00 AM

Nice poem, Arturo:)

Arturo Michael
Date: 5/29/2020 6:28:00 PM

Thank you Jo...It's light and easy...a play with words...and a good laugh at myself

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 5/28/2020 9:18:00 PM

Beautiful. I love it. God bless you and much love sent your way, Gina

Arturo Michael
Date: 5/29/2020 6:26:00 PM

Always sweet and kind...and a wonderful poetess too...I'm happy for your comment...Thank you Regina

Paul Callus

Date: 5/28/2020 5:48:00 PM

These lines would be ideal lyrics for a lovely romantic song, Arturo. Congratulations on p.o.t.d. award. Regards // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 5/31/2020 9:44:00 AM

I just came back to read this poem a second time and came across this comment, Arturo. You are doing a great job...keep up the good work..and thanks for liking 'my' song // paul

Arturo Michael
Date: 5/29/2020 6:24:00 PM

Thank you Paul...It was me making fun of me...Will try voicing first, see if I can get a flowing effect...like storytelling.... it would be easier for me...to develop something unique...don't have that love for singing like I use to...I heard the words of a song you were involved with...Very nice Paul

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 5/27/2020 10:55:00 PM

A beautiful, romantic tale of two people surely made for each other! Congratulations on POTD.

Arturo Michael
Date: 5/29/2020 6:15:00 PM

Yeah, for sure...Thanks Evelyn...in many ways

Janice Canerdy

Date: 5/26/2020 11:19:00 AM

A beautiful, vividly descriptive piece deserving of being chosen as POTD, Arturo! Janice

Arturo Michael
Date: 5/26/2020 1:40:00 PM

Thanks you Janice...it was a surprise...I never thought it would be chosen as a POTD... it was a word play...meant for fun...it only goes to show...can't take this thing too serious...

Jcb Brul

Date: 5/26/2020 10:35:00 AM

This is such a captivating piece! Worthy of an accolade..Congrats...

Arturo Michael
Date: 5/26/2020 1:37:00 PM

Thanks JCB...Playing with words

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/25/2020 6:01:00 PM

Congratulations on your POTD win. What a wonderful write. Your pen was filled with love. Enjoy your win, day and week.........

Arturo Michael
Date: 5/26/2020 4:16:00 AM

Thank you Paula...Nice to see you...All the best

Silent One

Date: 5/25/2020 4:20:00 PM

a poet and poetess making love would be so poetic... great poem and worthy of potd... Congrats.

Arturo Michael
Date: 5/26/2020 4:15:00 AM

A little lightheartedness on poetry and love...Thanks my friend

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/25/2020 10:23:00 AM

Very nice Arturo! Congratulations :)

Arturo Michael
Date: 5/26/2020 4:13:00 AM

Thank you Heidi...It's like an overview of what I'm doing...All the best my friend...

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 5/25/2020 7:15:00 AM

Love this Arturo...romance of two loves. Congrats on your POtD honor.

Arturo Michael
Date: 5/26/2020 4:11:00 AM

Thanks Jeanne...Glad you liked it

David Mchattie

Date: 5/24/2020 3:37:00 PM

Congrats on POTD. I do love a good romantic write. Probably because I'm so bad at them. Have a great day my friend.

Arturo Michael
Date: 5/24/2020 9:59:00 PM

Sometimes it's not easy to express love... and make light of it...Thank you my friend...All the best

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 5/24/2020 9:30:00 AM

Very cool write. Love it. Congrats. x

Arturo Michael
Date: 5/24/2020 9:57:00 PM

I had some fun here...Thanks Leanne...All the best my friend, keep strong as your are...

John Watt

Date: 5/23/2020 10:37:00 PM

Nicely crafted, Arturo. I am reminded of the old song, "Killing Me Softly With His Song" (sung from the female perspective). Very romantic in a wistful, longing way. Congratulations on your POTD ~ John

Arturo Michael
Date: 5/24/2020 4:02:00 AM

You're talking bout a big song...with Roberta Flack...I wish...Thank you John...All the best

Jc Hawkens

Date: 5/23/2020 9:38:00 PM

Congrats on POTD.

Arturo Michael
Date: 5/24/2020 4:00:00 AM

Thank you JC

Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/23/2020 9:30:00 PM

Arturo~ dear Poet! This is brilliant! So terricly happy for you. Panagiota

Arturo Michael
Date: 5/24/2020 4:00:00 AM

Panagiota...Hope you're keeping good...Haven't seen you for a while...All the best

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 5/23/2020 9:04:00 PM

Back with congrats dear poet! xomo <3

Arturo Michael
Date: 5/24/2020 3:58:00 AM

Thanks Maureen...Keep good

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/23/2020 6:45:00 PM

Congratulations on POTD!

Arturo Michael
Date: 5/24/2020 3:58:00 AM

Thanks Kim...

Brandy Nicole

Date: 5/23/2020 6:00:00 PM

Oh my!! It sounds like she has captured your heart. Her words leave you breathless. This is so beautiful and romantic. Congratulations Arturo, on Poem of the Day. : ) Brandy

Arturo Michael
Date: 5/24/2020 3:57:00 AM

Thank you Brandy...Good to see you...Keep safe...