Moon and Sun Collide

Moon and Sun collide
Line connects open circle
Swim to create life.


(January 11, 2011  Wausau, Wisconsin)

(c) Copyright 2011 by Christine A Kysely, All Rights Reserved
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Rhinem Avatar
January 12, 2011 at 8:55 AM
Smile ~ "Sounds As Very 'Magical Moment;' Brushed In Bright; 'Love,'" John!:) ~
Pettit Avatar
January 11, 2011 at 5:22 PM
Nice haiku, but there's eight syllables in the middle line. How about replacing "intersects" with either "bisects" or "divides"? Everything else looks good.
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