Moon and Sea

~Moon & Sea~

Hey, boy won't you open that door?
Let's sing and walk by the shore

Come and spread out your eyes
Block looking for reasons, and ways?

The cosmos are more than a space to explore
Don't hide when I need.... Plus more.

Finish playing a master in disguise!
Let's find the perfect sunrise, sunset surprise. 

Put your arms around me
Allow your moon to reflect off my sea

Too much time has passed you by
Come outside with and view the horizon up high

I've got my eyes set upon you
There's no need to feel blue

Hey, boy comes, climb up this tree!
I'm going to show you all the things you can't touch, you can't see.

Let's fit the luxury and beauty of this world into our play.
Don't say them words that will set me free to walk away.

Take this kiss and see how it feel deep within your heart.
Close your eyes in my garden, and draw with the fragrance of art

I want to take you into that space, astronomy love.
Making it easy to float with the clouds way up above.

Glide away from the blame of gravity and self-destruct.  
A bounce of the dust of hurt when you fall and get cut.

Boy, let's hold in this perfect air together.
Leave the cold end of someone else's weather.

Follow me beyond the distance of chemistry.
I will expose your moon and explain the physics of my sea. 

Give it another chance and you will see!
Your moon, is skin deep, needing water from me. 

Turn on the tune in your heart, and listen to me. 
In every sunrise, the moon entwines with the sea.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Thebarman Avatar
December 30, 2018 at 3:46 AM
Your poem is as fresh as today. I read it years ago and still love it as do many of my friends.
A  Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 11:03 PM
they belong to me **SKAT**
Dietrich Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 6:22 PM
hey, thanks for telling me I got a placement in that contest. I forgot all about it. HOw many more of y our contests remain to be judged? Yes, I remember the "good old days" of soup. They went and ruined everything with that reply button. but thankfully some poets still understand tradition!!
Nehls Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 4:03 AM
You are a very loving and compassionate person. Linda. You have much to offer in love and you have laid it on the line in your beautiful lines. This is either a love that is or could be, either way it's a pleasure to read and feel your heart as it glides through this poem. Well done my friend.... Robert.
Davis Avatar
November 25, 2013 at 7:44 PM
Linda You have written a poem that takes the reader on a journey of love and feeling. The imagery and descriptive words join together wonderfully. Nice job my friend
Dietrich Avatar
June 8, 2013 at 11:16 PM
good grief. MEN!!!(in case anyone is reading this, it was not a comment to the poem. haha just to a conversation via our poems. Good night now, I am getting off here soon)
Breidenthal Avatar
April 22, 2013 at 10:02 PM
It's always so great to have a companion with you to discover more and more beauty of this world we live in. This couplet is awesome. It was rewarding, choosing this poem of yours out of random...whoever this boy is, he is lucky to have you as a companion. I see many have enjoyed this couplet of yours. I can see why. Fly on, PD! Always, Laura
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
January 4, 2013 at 10:23 AM
excellent couplet.
Gasun Avatar
October 20, 2012 at 10:14 PM
Wow! This is another excellent write which I've missed my sisie-pooh! But, I'm so glad I found it! I'll keep this again, thanks! You know what? I am in love with the moon, sea, sunshine and sunset. They are so romantic. I have my latest paintings here, lovers kissing at sunset on the beach! Thank you so much! Hold on... i'll bathe myself first... ha ha then go for lunch. I'll be back soon! love, sisie-pooh Leonora
Dietrich Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 5:11 PM
pd, just to let you know, I know you like our names on our poems, but mine is already so long, that when I try to put my name under it, it won't let me edit it. It says "too long" so I know it's at least ONE of my longest poems if I can't even add my name on it!! Sorry, I wanted to put that it was for your contest but I could only just enter it, that's all.. Luv, Andrea
Jones Avatar
July 25, 2011 at 7:49 PM
HOT!
Rutherford Avatar
June 29, 2011 at 5:59 AM
Poem is great but the last two lines are magical . PD. A little sadness in it but I found it a wonderful read. Anne
Mister Roboto Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 10:49 AM
'Glide away from the blame of gravity and self destruct ' You're MoneyGriPP $$$ with that hot lick! Nice flow PD
Murray Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 8:27 PM
Wow, incredible. A true poet you are indeed. I loved this!!!!!
Greenlee Avatar
June 12, 2011 at 2:17 PM
Wonderful lines.You are a true poet.Effortless-stream of words flow through your fingertips...I am well,thank you for asking.I am very honored to have done so well in your contest.Quite enjoyed myself.I will be entering more of yours...Have a fab.day......love....me
Anish Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 8:21 PM
Liked this piece - especially the last two lines! Maybe we will meet one day. Peace & blessings Matthew Anish
Brown Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 12:49 PM
I hear some sadness within this write. Not what I wish to hear from you. Life is too short for unhappiness dear P.D. Is this why you are not here writing as much? Tickles tickles now smile my friend and cheer up. Love, Carol
Green Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 5:24 AM
it seems you are a master poet, and your poem here is a great write,it keeps me wanting to read it again and again....
Hall Mad Poet Avatar
May 21, 2011 at 5:00 PM
You make me fall deeply in love with you :-) Keep writing those love poems girl I'm all yours. hey P.D. your voice has changed in your comments. the one's before the last one on me Job Change seemed too formal and I have come to the conclusion that that was not really you. but this latest one is :-) XXX
Agtani Avatar
May 21, 2011 at 3:33 PM
P.D. Love this couplet! Romantic in tone. Nice evolving love poem that incorporates nature. Thanks for reading my poems. I am learning from all of the poets in poetry soup. Thanks for your positive comments on my Haikus. Dalila
Greenlee Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 6:19 PM
W.ow!Great stuff...Thanks again for your support of my work.Have a wonderful evening.Glad I had the chance to read your work....Sincerely,Kacey
Knop Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 7:05 AM
Enjoyed much and loved the read of your poem p.d.! I still have these problems mith arms hand and shoulder and it is quite painful. Thank you for you kind comments always!...Love, Gert
Castaneda Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 2:22 AM
7+ luv audree'
Song Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 12:34 AM
Hey P.D.- Racy romantic and really tight couplets. Thanks for sharing your work- Gwendolen ps-just noticed this one topppppped the charts for a while. You have an enormous audience. My audience are typically nonPS members so I am blessed beyond blessing.
Minardi Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 8:14 AM
Waaaa... This is very sweet P.D. Wonderful rhyming. I enjoyed reading this poem :)
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