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~Moon & Sea~

Hey, boy won't you open that door?
Let's sing and walk by the shore

Come and spread out your eyes
Block looking for reasons, and ways?

The cosmos are more than a space to explore
Don't hide when I need.... Plus more.

Finish playing a master in disguise!
Let's find the perfect sunrise, sunset surprise. 

Put your arms around me
Allow your moon to reflect off my sea

Too much time has passed you by
Come outside with and view the horizon up high

I've got my eyes set upon you
There's no need to feel blue

Hey, boy comes, climb up this tree!
I'm going to show you all the things you can't touch, you can't see.

Let's fit the luxury and beauty of this world into our play.
Don't say them words that will set me free to walk away.

Take this kiss and see how it feel deep within your heart.
Close your eyes in my garden, and draw with the fragrance of art

I want to take you into that space, astronomy love.
Making it easy to float with the clouds way up above.

Glide away from the blame of gravity and self-destruct.  
A bounce of the dust of hurt when you fall and get cut.

Boy, let's hold in this perfect air together.
Leave the cold end of someone else's weather.

Follow me beyond the distance of chemistry.
I will expose your moon and explain the physics of my sea. 

Give it another chance and you will see!
Your moon, is skin deep, needing water from me. 

Turn on the tune in your heart, and listen to me. 
In every sunrise, the moon entwines with the sea. 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 12/30/2018 3:46:00 AM
Your poem is as fresh as today. I read it years ago and still love it as do many of my friends.
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Date: 2/4/2016 11:03:00 PM
they belong to me **SKAT**
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Date: 7/29/2014 6:22:00 PM
hey, thanks for telling me I got a placement in that contest. I forgot all about it. HOw many more of y our contests remain to be judged? Yes, I remember the "good old days" of soup. They went and ruined everything with that reply button. but thankfully some poets still understand tradition!!
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Date: 7/16/2014 4:03:00 AM
You are a very loving and compassionate person. Linda. You have much to offer in love and you have laid it on the line in your beautiful lines. This is either a love that is or could be, either way it's a pleasure to read and feel your heart as it glides through this poem. Well done my friend.... Robert.
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Date: 11/25/2013 7:44:00 PM
Linda You have written a poem that takes the reader on a journey of love and feeling. The imagery and descriptive words join together wonderfully. Nice job my friend
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Date: 6/8/2013 11:16:00 PM
good grief. MEN!!!(in case anyone is reading this, it was not a comment to the poem. haha just to a conversation via our poems. Good night now, I am getting off here soon)
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Date: 4/22/2013 10:02:00 PM
It's always so great to have a companion with you to discover more and more beauty of this world we live in. This couplet is awesome. It was rewarding, choosing this poem of yours out of random...whoever this boy is, he is lucky to have you as a companion. I see many have enjoyed this couplet of yours. I can see why. Fly on, PD! Always, Laura
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Date: 1/4/2013 10:23:00 AM
excellent couplet.
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Date: 10/20/2012 10:14:00 PM
Wow! This is another excellent write which I've missed my sisie-pooh! But, I'm so glad I found it! I'll keep this again, thanks! You know what? I am in love with the moon, sea, sunshine and sunset. They are so romantic. I have my latest paintings here, lovers kissing at sunset on the beach! Thank you so much! Hold on... i'll bathe myself first... ha ha then go for lunch. I'll be back soon! love, sisie-pooh Leonora
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Date: 5/21/2012 5:11:00 PM
pd, just to let you know, I know you like our names on our poems, but mine is already so long, that when I try to put my name under it, it won't let me edit it. It says "too long" so I know it's at least ONE of my longest poems if I can't even add my name on it!! Sorry, I wanted to put that it was for your contest but I could only just enter it, that's all.. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/25/2011 7:49:00 PM
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Date: 6/29/2011 5:59:00 AM
Poem is great but the last two lines are magical . PD. A little sadness in it but I found it a wonderful read. Anne
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Date: 6/19/2011 10:49:00 AM
'Glide away from the blame of gravity and self destruct ' You're MoneyGriPP $$$ with that hot lick! Nice flow PD
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Date: 6/14/2011 8:27:00 PM
Wow, incredible. A true poet you are indeed. I loved this!!!!!
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Date: 6/12/2011 2:17:00 PM
Wonderful lines.You are a true poet.Effortless-stream of words flow through your fingertips...I am well,thank you for asking.I am very honored to have done so well in your contest.Quite enjoyed myself.I will be entering more of yours...Have a
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Date: 5/28/2011 8:21:00 PM
Liked this piece - especially the last two lines! Maybe we will meet one day. Peace & blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 5/26/2011 12:49:00 PM
I hear some sadness within this write. Not what I wish to hear from you. Life is too short for unhappiness dear P.D. Is this why you are not here writing as much? Tickles tickles now smile my friend and cheer up. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/26/2011 5:24:00 AM
it seems you are a master poet, and your poem here is a great write,it keeps me wanting to read it again and again....
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Date: 5/21/2011 5:00:00 PM
You make me fall deeply in love with you :-) Keep writing those love poems girl I'm all yours. hey P.D. your voice has changed in your comments. the one's before the last one on me Job Change seemed too formal and I have come to the conclusion that that was not really you. but this latest one is :-) XXX
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Date: 5/21/2011 3:33:00 PM
P.D. Love this couplet! Romantic in tone. Nice evolving love poem that incorporates nature. Thanks for reading my poems. I am learning from all of the poets in poetry soup. Thanks for your positive comments on my Haikus. Dalila
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Date: 5/20/2011 6:19:00 PM
W.ow!Great stuff...Thanks again for your support of my work.Have a wonderful evening.Glad I had the chance to read your work....Sincerely,Kacey
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Date: 5/20/2011 7:05:00 AM
Enjoyed much and loved the read of your poem p.d.! I still have these problems mith arms hand and shoulder and it is quite painful. Thank you for you kind comments always!...Love, Gert
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Date: 5/20/2011 2:22:00 AM
7+ luv audree'
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Date: 5/20/2011 12:34:00 AM
Hey P.D.- Racy romantic and really tight couplets. Thanks for sharing your work- Gwendolen ps-just noticed this one topppppped the charts for a while. You have an enormous audience. My audience are typically nonPS members so I am blessed beyond blessing.
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Date: 5/19/2011 8:14:00 AM
Waaaa... This is very sweet P.D. Wonderful rhyming. I enjoyed reading this poem :)
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