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Moon

(07/04/2013) You have an astonishing beauty From afar you capture me with your gleam When day gets tough and dreary I’ll gaze upon you and I know I’ll be able to dream Those in this world but you, are all tricky Perfection outside, but has ugly sins to redeem Unlike sun, never can be eyes savored Your scrumptiousness can’t be done devoured To me you are a grand in any phases If I was to land my humble feet on you On your crater I’d write a praise, Of how well you do your job to amaze Even when you are unsighted Every night, before reaching God On you I transit my grace As you beam your Amen to my face

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/7/2013 5:13:00 PM
this is beautiful
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Date: 4/26/2013 9:45:00 PM
Hi Dinda, I truly love this poem.It is beautiful!
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Date: 4/25/2013 3:44:00 AM
beautiful
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Date: 4/20/2013 12:42:00 AM
very beautiful tribute to the moon...nice ending too :)
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Date: 4/15/2013 9:22:00 PM
You give the moon her rightful place; the mystery, the magic and the quieet splendor riding in a night sky. Loved your portrayal! Love, Lizzie
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Date: 4/13/2013 1:38:00 PM
it is like magic. I love the poem , ~*~ SKAT
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Date: 4/13/2013 7:38:00 AM
This is a sweet moon poem, Dinda. I loved that last line: to beam an amen, that is clever!!
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Date: 4/12/2013 12:04:00 PM
lovely and deep ~*~SKAT
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Date: 4/12/2013 4:18:00 AM
I wonder who is this referring to, a mother, a brother? In any case this was very well written. "To me you are a grand in any phases" << I would like to be grand in the eyes someone at all times... sounds like a lucky person! Powerful writing, my friend!
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Date: 4/9/2013 2:06:00 PM
"On your crater I'd write a praise", that's just intense! A fantastic declaration!
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Date: 4/9/2013 1:33:00 AM
Nice one :) feeling of serenity is found.
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Date: 4/7/2013 1:19:00 PM
- Beautiful poem Dinda! - S-mail! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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