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Moon

Candle glow at midnight The hatch is locked A scrambling splutter As I reach for the key of circles and bolts and lines But just as before The circle ends Four corners behind And I'm scrambling again for another key I plead the glow as I– Well, do I cherish my existence once more? Foot taps to the humming Blood rushing under my skin I'm thrown to the couch A corner, I curb Did I feel the end? Was there an end in sight? My head tilts, and I Can't quite seem to keep the colours Steady in my mind For better or worse, I do mind Do I love? I don't love, I don't love, I don't love I don't love. I do love. I don't love. I do love.

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Date: 5/17/2025 7:32:00 AM
Ah that ending is brilliant and how youv written throughout with such creative lines is truly impressive! I love the flow and depth of your poem! Especially love "Foot taps to the humming Blood rushing under my skin I'm thrown to the couch A corner, I curb" something about the detailed manner you weave words makes me want to read more of your poems! Pleasure visiting you today! Sending you light always
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Abijah H.
Date: 5/18/2025 3:41:00 AM
Why, thank you! Very much appreciate the lovely comment, cheers for reading :) All good wishes back to you too o7

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