Moon

Candle glow at midnight
The hatch is locked
A scrambling splutter
As I reach for the key of circles and bolts and lines
But just as before
The circle ends
Four corners behind

And I'm scrambling again for another key
I plead the glow as I–
Well, do I cherish my existence once more?

Foot taps to the humming
Blood rushing under my skin
I'm thrown to the couch
A corner, I curb

Did I feel the end? Was there an end in sight?
My head tilts, and I
Can't quite seem to keep the colours
Steady in my mind
For better or worse, I do mind

Do I love?
I don't love, I don't love, I don't love
I don't love. I do love. I don't love. I do love.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Empress Avatar
May 17, 2025 at 7:32 AM
Ah that ending is brilliant and how youv written throughout with such creative lines is truly impressive! I love the flow and depth of your poem! Especially love "Foot taps to the humming Blood rushing under my skin I'm thrown to the couch A corner, I curb" something about the detailed manner you weave words makes me want to read more of your poems! Pleasure visiting you today! Sending you light always
Sinclair Avatar
May 18, 2025 at 3:41 AM
Why, thank you! Very much appreciate the lovely comment, cheers for reading :) All good wishes back to you too o7
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