Moon

the moon is mine tonight
from a little corner
of the room
i see it sheltered beneath
the bough of a tree
its full beauty is not diminished
by the smallness of the view
rather it is enhanced by
my feelings...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Bellefleur Avatar
April 8, 2009 at 5:47 PM
the moon is endless poetry - I am amazed how much there is to write about.
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April 7, 2009 at 6:20 PM
"Its full beauty is not diminished by the smallness of the view, rather it is enhanced by my feelings"~Smile, so very lovely this message within this wonderful poem....what one chooses to hold inside? Shall have a great impact upon how they see all things within life!!:) Wonderfully written write dear Jacqueline!!:) And welcome to the soup~"Warmth & Blessings To 'You & Yours,' John!!:):) Bye ~
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