Moon

MOON Luna in soft glow Long strolls in moonlight With romance shining through Tender kisses, starry eyes "Moon brings out romantic phases"

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Valsa George

Date: 6/19/2022 7:12:00 AM

Moon is dear to bards and beaus alike. Beautiful poem on moonlight romance, dear Joseph.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/18/2022 3:12:00 PM

oh wow, I just now saw that the contest was judged. Thanks so much for my win, Joseph. I had guessed right that the pyramid poem contest was yours! and you had even congratulated me earlier today. I am such a dodo bird.

Joseph May
Date: 6/19/2022 5:47:00 AM

Thanks Andrea, I guess sometimes we are all dodo birds

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/18/2022 2:28:00 PM

ohh, this is so pretty. Did this contest ever get judged yet? (was it YOUR contest?) I can't keep track any more!! Anyway, I love your moon poem. How fun to see it underneath the strawberry moon tanka!

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 6/16/2022 4:07:00 PM

The magical effects of the moon when love is in the air. Well written. love phyl

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/15/2022 1:17:00 PM

A lovely moon write. This week there was a huge beautiful moon. Hope you got the see it. I wish you would write more. Have a blessed day writing away...............

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/6/2022 9:11:00 PM

There is something so magical about the Moon and its soft, sensual glow. Yes, love is in the air. This is so beautiful and romantic. :) Hugs, Brandy