Notes About The Poem

happy or depressed
life is a balancing act
so easy to slip...
moods that fall can rise again
wait for tomorrow's new day

 

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Poet's note:
Photo credit:  Mood Swing by Dominic Alves | via Flickr
Link to Creative Commons License:  CC BY 2.0
 

Mood Swings

happy or depressed
life is a balancing act
so easy to slip...
moods that fall can rise again
wait for tomorrow's new day
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Nicole Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 9:38 PM
There will always be a positive around the negative. :) I think so anyway. Keep smiling my friend. ~ Brandy
Nicole Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 1:46 PM
You are welcome Mark. Such a kind thing to say. I am just being me. :) Brandy
Toney Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 1:13 PM
Brandy, I do so appreciate the positive energy that you freely radiate to all of your fellow Soupers! :)
Nicole Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 12:24 PM
:) Thank you. I am smiling.
Toney Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 12:18 PM
So true. Ditto, Kiddo :)
Faulkner Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 3:40 PM
yes so easy to slip, but tomorrow can always be better!
Toney Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 5:43 PM
Or even the next day. A positive attitude and patience works wonders! Thanks, Michelle.
House Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 9:59 PM
I like your haiku. You write all different kinds of poetry. This is great. Which one do you like to write the most?
Toney Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 11:22 PM
That’s a great question, Bonnie. The short answer is I like them all :) Before I joined PoetrySoup in April, in addition to longer verse and rhyme poems, I had started to write haiku, which I had really been fond of back in school. After joining PoetrySoup, I was exposed to senryu and tanka too, plus the footle. I like the way that the shorter forms can often convey deep meaning, but also can be light and fun at times. Thanks for asking, Bonnie. Cheers!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 2:33 PM
Lovely said Mark, words to live by :) xomo
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 8:20 PM
Yup. ;)
Toney Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 5:55 PM
So true, Maureen. Sometimes easier said than done, yeah? Always good to hear from you. Take care.
Chakrabarty Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 11:22 AM
So encouraging......simple words make your poem great. Regards.
Toney Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 2:25 PM
Rajat, thank you for stopping by to offer me some encouragement. :)
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