Months of Sundays

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Brian Strand.

MONET the enlightened https://www.claudemonetgallery.org/The-Water-Lily-Pond-Aka-Japanese-Bridge.html

interfaces
  of phenomena
         rapid&impetuous

outlandish
melodies
  of unchanging
              light
concentrated
repetitive
transformations
   everchanging

space
   between
      motifs
of
  lilies
    poplars
       rivers&ponds

monumental
   impressions
     in the eye

ephemeral
acts of perception
convey
    what is alive
             vibrant

 valued &visual

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/31/2021 7:39:00 AM

Very descriptive work. We went out to Spewell Bluff the other day and it had rained for several days so the river was rapid and everchanging its motif. Sara

Brian Strand
Date: 1/31/2021 2:51:00 PM

Monet was the same Sara,you are in good company