Montage Meltdown

MONTAGE    MELTDOWN


Giant killer bird in death struggle with freak  girl-flower.

Bird combs child’s hair, child smoothes bird feather.

Concrete  bird-statue being pushed over by tot-vandal pest.

Awarded last place  in   Tidy Garden Contest .     

Child and her pet  swallowed by garden weeds.

Legless girl clutches bird for balance  needs.

Leg-eating flowers  attack girl, leave bird intact.

Day Of The Triffids,  but with droopy daisies in fact.

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NOTE

These lines are in the style of newspaper headlines,  all possible 
interpretations of  the montage.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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George   Avatar
April 8, 2011 at 3:45 AM
lol!!!! Now that is simply WILD. LOVED IT, Sydney. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie
Guzzi Avatar
April 7, 2011 at 3:16 PM
HOW very OR ridge in nal!!! Congrad's on your big win! Light & Love
Onclaud Avatar
April 7, 2011 at 11:53 AM
wow, an HM for a short list syd.. congrats! lol... :) huggs
Phookan Avatar
April 7, 2011 at 11:26 AM
Congratulation on your win Sydney, a very unique take on the montage picture. Awesome creative write...Gautami
Sweetheart Avatar
April 7, 2011 at 8:22 AM
Congrats Syd on your HM in Robb's contest ..another great write and win for u to enjoy luv .. a special honor just for u for an exceptional piece ...
Richards Avatar
April 7, 2011 at 8:16 AM
Such an interesting take on the contest!! Very original !! Congratulations, Sydney!!
Brown Avatar
April 7, 2011 at 8:05 AM
Congratulations on your win in Robb's contest Sydney. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
April 7, 2011 at 7:15 AM
Congratulations on the HM win in the contest of Robb, Sydney
Sweetheart Avatar
March 19, 2011 at 5:51 PM
Syd ..this is phenomenal luv.. such a unique aspect on the photo interpretation .. a grand entry ..good luck luv..
Gorelick Avatar
March 19, 2011 at 5:28 PM
OMG..completely creative...I love this the best. BG
Guzzi Avatar
March 19, 2011 at 3:27 PM
SO odd? I know the contest LOL, I'm trying too. [Syd please do me a favor read Part 1 When Madness Rides on Moonlight / I am trying to get it all on 1 page rather than 2 and I want to see the pagelayout which I only know how to do from a comment, so comment to please.] Light & Love
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