Montage

Mystic melon moment Moistening thirsty lips Molecules of pleasure Mooning about within Mellow crimson milieu Mirth in hemoglobin Montage of the summits __________________________________________________ April 20, 2017 Pleiades M - Poetry Contest Sponsor : Kim Merryman

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Mark Martin

Date: 5/1/2017 5:21:00 AM

Can taste and smell the melon by reading this. Congratulations on your win Probir! :-)

Probir Gupta
Date: 5/2/2017 12:30:00 PM

Thank you so much ...

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/25/2017 6:58:00 AM

An interesting write, dear Probir! Congrats!

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/25/2017 7:07:00 AM

Thanks Kim ...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/23/2017 1:57:00 PM

- A great poem on the letter "M", Probir :) - Congratulations on your winning poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/25/2017 5:36:00 AM

Thank you so much, Anne ...

Agnes Krampe

Date: 4/23/2017 7:45:00 AM

Beautiful, Probir. I'll have to read this again and digest all the images. Congrats on your win.

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/23/2017 8:11:00 AM

Glad to learn ... thank you ...

Chris Green

Date: 4/20/2017 1:06:00 PM

This was fantastic. You have expressed well your theme in this difficult form and made it look not only beautiful but easy.

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/21/2017 7:20:00 AM

I like to write in this form ... one can say much in a little ... Thank you for liking ...

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/20/2017 11:51:00 AM

Miraculous and Majestic writing my friend, Probir! Good to see you again! A 7+ and good luck my friend!

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/20/2017 12:20:00 PM

But for me it has been ordinary ... Great indeed if a poet of your height finds it so ... Elation ... Thanks in profusion ...