Montage

Mystic melon moment Moistening thirsty lips Molecules of pleasure Mooning about within Mellow crimson milieu Mirth in hemoglobin Montage of the summits __________________________________________________ April 20, 2017 Pleiades M - Poetry Contest Sponsor : Kim Merryman
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Martin Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 5:21 AM
Can taste and smell the melon by reading this. Congratulations on your win Probir! :-)
Gupta Avatar
May 2, 2017 at 12:30 PM
Thank you so much ...
Rodrigues Avatar
April 25, 2017 at 6:58 AM
An interesting write, dear Probir! Congrats!
Gupta Avatar
April 25, 2017 at 7:07 AM
Thanks Kim ...
Andresen Avatar
April 23, 2017 at 1:57 PM
- A great poem on the letter "M", Probir :) - Congratulations on your winning poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gupta Avatar
April 25, 2017 at 5:36 AM
Thank you so much, Anne ...
Krampe Avatar
April 23, 2017 at 7:45 AM
Beautiful, Probir. I'll have to read this again and digest all the images. Congrats on your win.
Gupta Avatar
April 23, 2017 at 8:11 AM
Glad to learn ... thank you ...
Green Avatar
April 20, 2017 at 1:06 PM
This was fantastic. You have expressed well your theme in this difficult form and made it look not only beautiful but easy.
Gupta Avatar
April 21, 2017 at 7:20 AM
I like to write in this form ... one can say much in a little ... Thank you for liking ...
Trifiatis Avatar
April 20, 2017 at 11:51 AM
Miraculous and Majestic writing my friend, Probir! Good to see you again! A 7+ and good luck my friend!
Gupta Avatar
April 20, 2017 at 12:20 PM
But for me it has been ordinary ... Great indeed if a poet of your height finds it so ... Elation ... Thanks in profusion ...
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