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Monsoon Showers

Grey clouds thunder tearing the sky, chirpy birds back to their nests fly. Lucid drops of divine wonder, tearing the sky, grey clouds thunder. Merry buds, sparkling veil cuddles, my pup splashes love in puddles. Violet hues in streaming floods, sparkling veil cuddles merry buds. Pink tulips dancing to quick beats, dripping mellow bathes tranquil streets. Parched lilies moisten their blue lips, dancing to quick beats, pink tulips. Drenched carefree I am monsoon kissed, dreamy muse floats in rejoiced mist. Scented wisps lend their hand to me, I am monsoon kissed, drenched carefree. June 10, 2020 Swap Quatrain Poetry Contest Sponsor: Emile Pinet Checked rhymes on https://www.rhymezone.com/ Checked syllables on https://www.howmanysyllables.com (8 syllables per line) ~Winner: 14th Place

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John Watt

Date: 7/10/2020 7:47:00 PM

A lovely write of the joys of rain, Aditi. I liked "Parched lilies moisten their blue lips". Congrats on your win, my friend!

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/11/2020 8:13:00 AM

Glad you love my words dear friend. Thank you for your kind appreciation. Blessings :)

Emile Pinet

Date: 7/10/2020 1:25:00 PM

Congratulations Aditi, your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest, well done my friend, Emile.

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/11/2020 8:13:00 AM

Thank you for your kind appreciation and for my placement in your contest Emile. Blessings :)

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 6/11/2020 5:19:00 AM

very beautiful poem shared, pleasure to read; greatly I enjoyed

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/11/2020 6:14:00 AM

Glad you enjoyed my words. Thank you for visiting and dropping by your gracious words of appreciation. Blessings to you :)

Jenish Somadas

Date: 6/11/2020 1:20:00 AM

Lucid drops of divine wonder.. Your words are beautiful than the monsoon drops.. Great write..

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/11/2020 6:14:00 AM

So glad you love my words Jenish. It is always a pleasure to read uplifting words from you. Thank you! God bless you :)

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 6/10/2020 3:25:00 PM

Lovely piece Aditi, such great imagery and lovely rhyme too. blessings, Gordon

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/10/2020 3:33:00 PM

Blessed by your visit and your kind words of appreciation and blessings Gordon. God bless you. Have a great day :)

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 6/10/2020 10:39:00 AM

You are an amazing poetess my dear Aditi...I so look forward to seeing and reading one of your poems. This is a fav

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/10/2020 12:23:00 PM

Thank you so much for the fave and for the love you shower upon my words. Blessed to read from you dear Jeanne. Much love and blessings :)

Mohan Chutani

Date: 6/10/2020 7:51:00 AM

Aditi. Grey clouds already thundering in your area. We are only.blessed with dust storms in up north currently. Await the monsoon. Lovely quatrain. Best. Mohan

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/10/2020 12:22:00 PM

I believe monsoon will arrive in the North soon. In West, we have been relieved of the humidity with these showers but monsoon is always difficult for Mumbai. Yet, we love it. Thank you for your lovely wishes. Blessings :)

John Hamilton

Date: 6/10/2020 7:27:00 AM

This is great writing Aditi. I'm sure Emile will love it, I sense a winner with this one!

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/10/2020 12:19:00 PM

Glad you loved it John :) Thank you for your warm wishes and encouragement.