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Monsoon Fest: a Nonet

""""""""((((''''''''''' auburn light tickling mystic marshlands on thin rafts kissing noon's delight husky day lifts grasses’ hems cradling petals on palms, herons dance astray a dizzy feast all flowers soaking wine """""""""""""""""" all rights reserved © for Brian Strand's "Poem From Year First Year... Contest" from nette onclaud

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Caryl Muzzey

Date: 7/14/2011 12:47:00 PM

Congratulations Nette on your wonderful poem taking second place. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/29/2011 5:50:00 AM

Congratulations Nette on your win in the "Any First Year Poem on PS" contest sponsored by Brian Strand. Love, Carol

Cory Long

Date: 6/28/2011 5:44:00 PM

congrats on your fine win nette and thanks for your warm comments on poetry wings. cory

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/28/2011 5:13:00 PM

great personification as always ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/28/2011 2:52:00 PM

Congrats Nette luv on your dynamic win in the contest .. awesome words.. excellent win.. luv sharing winners list with one of the very best and my great friend too..

Daver Austin

Date: 2/23/2011 2:10:00 PM

A colorful journey. "All flowers soaking wine." Love this ending. Love, daver

Joe Maverick

Date: 2/23/2011 1:11:00 PM

i am quite happy to soak up as much of this as you can put out Nette, quite a lovley write.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/23/2011 6:13:00 AM

enjoyed reading your work today and thanks for reading my silly puppy poem.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/23/2011 5:02:00 AM

So luv the Nonet form Nette my friend and u have given it life in this dynamic piece luv.. giving me inspiration to write one also.. lovely images u present so very inviting.. enjoyed with luv..