Nette Onclaud Poet Nonet

Monsoon Fest: a Nonet

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auburn light tickling mystic marshlands
on thin rafts kissing noon's delight
husky day  lifts grasses’ hems
cradling petals on palms,
herons dance astray
a dizzy feast
all flowers
soaking
wine

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for Brian Strand's "Poem From Year First Year... Contest"
from nette onclaud

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Caryl Muzzey July 14, 2011 at 12:47 PM Congratulations Nette on your wonderful poem taking second place. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl

Carol Sunshine Brown June 29, 2011 at 5:50 AM Congratulations Nette on your win in the "Any First Year Poem on PS" contest sponsored by Brian Strand. Love, Carol

Cory Long June 28, 2011 at 5:44 PM congrats on your fine win nette and thanks for your warm comments on poetry wings. cory

Debbie Guzzi June 28, 2011 at 5:13 PM great personification as always ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 28, 2011 at 2:52 PM Congrats Nette luv on your dynamic win in the contest .. awesome words.. excellent win.. luv sharing winners list with one of the very best and my great friend too..

Daver Austin February 23, 2011 at 2:10 PM A colorful journey. "All flowers soaking wine." Love this ending. Love, daver

Joe Maverick February 23, 2011 at 1:11 PM i am quite happy to soak up as much of this as you can put out Nette, quite a lovley write.

Doris Culverhouse February 23, 2011 at 6:13 AM enjoyed reading your work today and thanks for reading my silly puppy poem.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 23, 2011 at 5:02 AM So luv the Nonet form Nette my friend and u have given it life in this dynamic piece luv.. giving me inspiration to write one also.. lovely images u present so very inviting.. enjoyed with luv..

Andrea Dietrich February 22, 2011 at 11:34 PM great imagery. I just loved the third and fourth lines down! what a nice scene to have seen!

Robert Pettit February 22, 2011 at 9:28 PM It's not easy to write one of these poems, but you performed admirably here.

Constance La France February 22, 2011 at 8:33 PM "a pefect nonet" does it get any better than this, just wonderful~~

Dr.Ram Mehta February 22, 2011 at 5:55 PM Nice write on the monsoon fest and beautiful images, nette

Robert A. Dufresne February 22, 2011 at 4:59 PM you got me on this one again Nette. I kn ow nothing about this nonet style. Shall have to look it up. looks interesting as does your poem.

Carolyn Devonshire February 22, 2011 at 11:12 AM Well, this sounds like a celebration in which I'd enjoy participating, Nette! A fun time must be had by all. Awesome nonet! Love, Carolyn

Kash Poet February 22, 2011 at 10:59 AM Excellent imagery here nette!Love it.---kashinath

Nette Onclaud February 22, 2011 at 10:12 AM a happy respite and a break writing something just for you and all -- my way! :)